Something about that picture just... bothers me. I can't quite figure out what, though.
(And no, it isn't the totally visible nipples.)
Maybe it's the composition.
here I'll try again.
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The first is really striking, the third's got great composition, and the last is phenomenal. The other two are good, but those are the ones that stood out to me.
Nicely done.
that model helped me a lot.
definitely excited to work with her more
[QUOTE=The Salmon;49883037]nice eye, love the first one[/QUOTE]
Thank you, I took that photo at the old warehouse I worked in.. there is always good picture opportunities in a warehouse setting.
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[QUOTE=jp_rsardeto;49846210]what softwares do you guys use to adjust things of your photos?[/QUOTE]
lightroom
photoshop if going into a magazine but thats another story
Fucking damn it. Trying to get back into photography now I have a half-decent camera after about 4 or so years only to discover my eyesight is so shit only one of my photos out of 30 odd I took was actually in focus. I've got glasses for short-sightedness but I can't see shit through the viewfinder with them on.
[t]http://i.imgur.com/5eGrDeE.jpg[/t]
[editline]7th March 2016[/editline]
I think it looks better cropped
[t]http://i.imgur.com/xKooHpE.jpg[/t]
[QUOTE=Trogdon;49882034]photos[/QUOTE]
damnit trogdon stop being so good
every photo you take is great, you have a real eye for composition
[QUOTE=download;49883899]Fucking damn it. Trying to get back into photography now I have a half-decent camera after about 4 or so years only to discover my eyesight is so shit only one of my photos out of 30 odd I took was actually in focus. I've got glasses for short-sightedness but I can't see shit through the viewfinder with them on.
[t]http://i.imgur.com/5eGrDeE.jpg[/t]
[editline]7th March 2016[/editline]
I think it looks better cropped
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There should be an adjustment wheel for that on your camera just by the viewfinder! I'm pretty fucking nearsighted, so I turn it all the way to one side and then just put my glasses on my forehead if my they get in the way when looking through the viewfinder. Most of the time I can use my glasses on there just fine, they just get a little smudgy from being squeezed into my disgusting face.
This guy here:
[t]http://improvephotography.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/08/Canon_diopter.jpg[/t]
Called the Diopter :)
Make sure you are also paying close attention to how your autofocus is selected- depending on the make of the camera some focus points can be more precise than others (cross-type versus normal), and if you have it on 'autoselection' it may just be picking random focus points instead of using one focus point and then composing the image after you've focused.
[QUOTE=kirby2112;49818738][url=https://flic.kr/p/DX2vg6][img]https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1719/24907901239_47c853aae0_c.jpg[/img][/url][url=https://flic.kr/p/DX2vg6]DSC_0477[/url] by [url=https://www.flickr.com/photos/kirby2112/]kirby2112 .[/url], on Flickr[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=kirby2112;49846286]
thanks so much!! Anything in particular about it, so i can attempt to continue doing it?
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This one is in the same seam:
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Good work!
doing more fashion/portraits, any critique would be appreciated! And nah, Bank of America did not pay me to do this, unfortunately :(
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I'm going to assume that BoA isn't really into that particular aesthetic, and a random hipster artist wouldn't be able to just put the BoA logo in a sweatshirt and sell it- so you might be missing the mark with the audience a bit there. And it goes without saying you can't just have the logo all clumped up in the folds of the fabric. Maybe I'm wrong and it's more about the whole outfit, which isn't a bad look.
Otherwise, I was initially impressed but got a bit bogged down with the sheer quantity- and it's tough to single any out to leave out. #5 in particular seems less interesting than the rest, even though still good use of color in the comp.
Love the subtle absurdity, the last one stands out
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;49890418]I'm going to assume that BoA isn't really into that particular aesthetic, and a random hipster artist wouldn't be able to just put the BoA logo in a sweatshirt and sell it- so you might be missing the mark with the audience a bit there. And it goes without saying you can't just have the logo all clumped up in the folds of the fabric. Maybe I'm wrong and it's more about the whole outfit, which isn't a bad look.
Otherwise, I was initially impressed but got a bit bogged down with the sheer quantity- and it's tough to single any out to leave out. #5 in particular seems less interesting than the rest, even though still good use of color in the comp.[/QUOTE]
it's more of a personal outfit I wear that I decide to model for a person. This is actually just a more elaborate and less vain way of showcasing my outfits lmao. I just found the sweatshirt at a thrift store and I saw the place with the colors and decide to do a shoot for it. I do agree with the clumped out folds, that's just my bad.
I was thinking of just cutting #5 actually. I really couldn't decide. I think as a set it's too much but I always found it difficult balancing how much to cut and actually put out. Maybe I will delete it though, I think it looks to similar to #4 anyways.
Yeah, I figured you wouldn't be the type to ~~go corporate~~ ehue. Anyways the main strength of 5 is the background but it's pretty unflattering for the dude unless you want to get a tiny bit absurdist or menacing with it.
Just came back from the most depressing place on earth. And my god, it drains you both physically and mentally.
[url=https://flic.kr/p/E5HhD5][img]https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1673/24994878734_5ea728e9f1_c.jpg[/img][/url][url=https://flic.kr/p/E5HhD5]IMG_6422.jpg[/url] by [url=https://www.flickr.com/photos/132428006@N07/]Ngoh shian Bang[/url], on Flickr
[QUOTE=Ignhelper;49894939]Just came back from the most depressing place on earth. And my god, it drains you both physically and mentally.
[url=https://flic.kr/p/E5HhD5][img]https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1673/24994878734_5ea728e9f1_c.jpg[/img][/url][url=https://flic.kr/p/E5HhD5]IMG_6422.jpg[/url] by [url=https://www.flickr.com/photos/132428006@N07/]Ngoh shian Bang[/url], on Flickr[/QUOTE]
I remember going there about four years ago. It's pretty crazy to actually see the place where everything went down. I think the creepiest and saddest part was seeing all the hair of the prisoners in one of the rooms.
[QUOTE=PenguinKris;49894991]I remember going there about four years ago. It's pretty crazy to actually see the place where everything went down. I think the creepiest and saddest part was seeing all the hair of the prisoners in one of the rooms.[/QUOTE]
There was this guy in the group taking pictures even though he was told not to. I couldn't stand it and told him to show some fucking respect.
Another was using flash on a sign that says no flash allowed
Another lady was taking a selfie stick and using it for selfies.
How the fuck can people be so out of touch?
title page for an upcoming art project
[IMG]https://c2.staticflickr.com/2/1583/25646558995_e9f0b46d11_c.jpg[/IMG]
all done with physical layering in a scanner
v good
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i'm getting bored with all this thinly veiled originality, back to blatant copycatting :^)
Getting into analog street photography, shot a few rolls of Poundland film with a Canon AV-1.
[t]http://i.imgur.com/wqGGr9G.jpg[/t][t]http://i.imgur.com/s8MaQGL.jpg[/t][t]http://i.imgur.com/WnhmiHt.jpg[/t]
Shot a black and white roll too, which has yet to be developed.
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