another weekend messing around
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and me nearly getting run over
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[editline]6th February 2017[/editline]
[QUOTE=TomboPukka;51784381]another weekend messing around
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I love your style so much. The post editing is excellent
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i feel like i'm going crazy, have you posted these same photos in the thread like three times this page or smth?
(there is merit to being able to create multiple interesting photographs within the same physical space, but they should probably be noticeably different photographs.)
[QUOTE=kirby2112;51785216]i feel like i'm going crazy, have you posted these same photos in the thread like three times this page or smth?
(there is merit to being able to create multiple interesting photographs within the same physical space, but they should probably be noticeably different photographs.)[/QUOTE]
Yeah, I was experimenting with different angles n stuff. This were actually taken at opposite sides of the building, but I suppose things will get repetitive when I challenge myself to one building.
[editline]6th February 2017[/editline]
What do you think of the actual photos tho dood
[QUOTE=lope;51785694]What do you think of the actual photos tho dood[/QUOTE]
IMO, i think the first would have heightened interest if the figure wasn't so casually dressed/posed. it would be great with a little heavier lean on the intrigue angle. composition easily implies somet
Second is strong, although i flip flop on whether or not i like the light patch at the bottom. Great lines throughout, though.
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What do you think of the actual photos tho dood[/QUOTE]
as a set they're samey, on their own they're kind of sloppy, and don't really hold interest for me. The second one in your last post could be improved with some more care given to the framing. It could do with a little straightening and centering. In the one with the guy standing on the elevated walkway, because you're relying on a silhouette, readability is very important. There are lines intersecting with the individual's head, which break up the silhouette and make it more difficult to immediately identify as a human figure. The framing could be altered to include more light space around the darkness of the guy, which will allow the viewer to more immediately recognize it. A half bend of the knees would solve this, giving a little more room for the head.
if that one's posed, remember u have all the time in the world to consider composition, so try to spend a little more time on it. Same goes for most of them, since they don't feature moving subjects other than the light
[QUOTE=kirby2112;51786025]as a set they're samey, on their own they're kind of sloppy, and don't really hold interest for me. The second one in your last post could be improved with some more care given to the framing. It could do with a little straightening and centering. In the one with the guy standing on the elevated walkway, because you're relying on a silhouette, readability is very important. There are lines intersecting with the individual's head, which break up the silhouette and make it more difficult to immediately identify as a human figure. The framing could be altered to include more light space around the darkness of the guy, which will allow the viewer to more immediately recognize it. A half bend of the knees would solve this, giving a little more room for the head.
if that one's posed, remember u have all the time in the world to consider composition, so try to spend a little more time on it. Same goes for most of them, since they don't feature moving subjects other than the light[/QUOTE]
Thanks for the feedback. As for the posing, no, it wasn't. Just some guy walking by who happened to stop to glance at his phone. But again, thank you for the feedback, it helps.
I'm no expert, but I'd hazard a guess and say that he [I]flew.[/I]
[QUOTE=FlippR;51787732]how did you get up there[/QUOTE]
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is this a sony??
Up high
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After editing this, I realized it looked like it came straight out of one of my favorite mangas, Oyasumi Punpun.
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I like the teeth.
[t]http://i.imgur.com/vNJfJAE.jpg[/t]
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[I]Love you too, Kirbs. [/I]
Down low
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hey black and white posts; :v: I just got my 400tx developed. i think i might buy my own set of chemicals
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[QUOTE=PenguinKris;51792231]hey black and white posts; :v: I just got my 400tx developed. i think i might buy my own set of chemicals
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really like this one
and definitely try your own developing, it's fun!
Man... That is a beautiful film. And some beautiful pictures, of course.
Also, developing is super easy. Loading the film onto the reels is the hardest part, everything from there is cake.
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It was foggy yesterday.
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