[QUOTE=Slater;37307966]Little bit more padding on the text. It's too close to the iPhone for my liking.[/QUOTE]
Already fixed, but I don't want to clutter this thread up with tons of update pictures.
Wow CarLuver69, It's almost as if you had an annoying client that asks for tons of changes, but he actually makes good changes :v:
[QUOTE=barttool;37308126]Wow CarLuver69, It's almost as if you had an annoying client that asks for tons of changes, but he actually makes good changes :v:[/QUOTE]
Uhh, what?
Add more space between the headers and the paragraphs if you haven't already.
ohh, and we like images CarLuver69, when you have made big/important changes ;)
There, I've remade it, this time using an open source font (it was Helvetica Neue before) and also included navigation in the footer (I think putting it at the top is not really a good idea).
[t]http://gabrielecirulli.com/p/20120819-132509.png[/t]
No need for special red text in the navigation or anything like that. The blue button should lead to the buy now page and that should be it. The links in the footer are just there to help further navigation.
If you need them, here are some specifications from the design.
- The total width is 812px;
- The font used is called Open Sans (you can embed it in your page from [URL="http://www.google.com/webfonts#UsePlace:use/Collection:Open+Sans"]Google Web Fonts[/URL], make sure to select book, normal and bold as weights). Install it before you open the PSD.
- The main font-size is 13px (I would not go for something higher unless it's a title or a call to action, which in this case is the button) and the line-height is 20px
- For the title, the font-weight is Light (book) and the font-size is 40px
- For the button text, it's 30px bold
- You can create basically every part of the design using CSS (gradients, text shadows, line-height, etc.)
- I put the navigation links and footer at the bottom because this page is not tall, so most users would be able to see them straight away, and putting it at the top would disrupt the look of the page.
You can download the file from here
[URL]https://www.box.com/s/660e8d12c772c5d3f18c[/URL]
[editline]19th August 2012[/editline]
And I have no idea why you do it but please do not resize text horizontally. It looks [I]awful[/I].
and now we wait for the mess that he comes back with in html/css
The team behind this CAPTCHA, really need to so something about this:
[img]http://i.imgur.com/RJrpt.png[/img]
How am I supposed to know what that is?
[QUOTE=xmariusx;37311384]The team behind CAPTCHA, really need to so something about this:
[img]http://i.imgur.com/RJrpt.png[/img]
How am I supposed to know what that is?[/QUOTE]
You can't read alienese? Everyone knows it says ℷℸ♄►c☖.
[QUOTE=TerabyteS_;37311189]There, I've remade it, this time using an open source font (it was Helvetica Neue before) and also included navigation in the footer (I think putting it at the top is not really a good idea).
[t]http://gabrielecirulli.com/p/20120819-132509.png[/t]
No need for special red text in the navigation or anything like that. The blue button should lead to the buy now page and that should be it. The links in the footer are just there to help further navigation.
If you need them, here are some specifications from the design.
- The total width is 812px;
- The font used is called Open Sans (you can embed it in your page from [URL="http://www.google.com/webfonts#UsePlace:use/Collection:Open+Sans"]Google Web Fonts[/URL], make sure to select book, normal and bold as weights). Install it before you open the PSD.
- The main font-size is 13px (I would not go for something higher unless it's a title or a call to action, which in this case is the button) and the line-height is 20px
- For the title, the font-weight is Light (book) and the font-size is 40px
- For the button text, it's 30px bold
- You can create basically every part of the design using CSS (gradients, text shadows, line-height, etc.)
- I put the navigation links and footer at the bottom because this page is not tall, so most users would be able to see them straight away, and putting it at the top would disrupt the look of the page.
You can download the file from here
[URL]https://www.box.com/s/660e8d12c772c5d3f18c[/URL]
[editline]19th August 2012[/editline]
And I have no idea why you do it but please do not resize text horizontally. It looks [I]awful[/I].[/QUOTE]
For the sake of trying to get him to use this design as atleast a base. I will create the html/css mockup later for him if you don't mind.
[QUOTE=Sharpshooter;37311496]For the sake of trying to get him to use this design as atleast a base. I will create the html/css mockup later for him if you don't mind.[/QUOTE]
Sure!
I know you guys are just trying to help and that's nice and all but he's never going to get better if you just do everything for him.
[QUOTE=CarLuver69;37307900]As I said above, it was my brother who suggested that. Remember, I'm designing this website for someone else. I was just giving him what he wanted, if it was me personally, I wouldn't have made the "Buy Now" button bold red.[/QUOTE]
Ask your brother who the web developer is
if you are the older one give him a wedgie if you are the younger one tell your mum.
[QUOTE=xmariusx;37311384]The team behind this CAPTCHA, really need to so something about this:
[img]http://i.imgur.com/RJrpt.png[/img]
How am I supposed to know what that is?[/QUOTE]
Most CAPTCHA's are too complicated to read now, 90% of the time I always enter them wrong.
[QUOTE=Jelly;37311597]I know you guys are just trying to help and that's nice and all but he's never going to get better if you just do everything for him.[/QUOTE]
I understand what your saying and I do agree, I am just trying to point him in the right direction, pushing him towards using Tera's design as atleast a base and providing him with some of the resources to get himself started.
Heres the design converted to html/css anyways:
[url]http://www.jboden.org.uk/iphoneunlocker[/url]
and it can be downloaded from here:
[url]http://www.jboden.org.uk/iphoneunlocker/mockuptohtml.rar[/url]
[QUOTE=Sharpshooter;37312103]I understand what your saying and I do agree, I am just trying to point him in the right direction, pushing him towards using Tera's design as atleast a base and providing him with some of the resources to get himself started.
Heres the design converted to html/css anyways:
[URL]http://www.jboden.org.uk/iphoneunlocker[/URL]
and it can be downloaded from here:
[URL]http://www.jboden.org.uk/iphoneunlocker/mockuptohtml.rar[/URL][/QUOTE]
I love it! There's just a little issue with the footer, you should try putting a clearfix div before it because right now the iPhone picture is pushing it to the right.
[editline]19th August 2012[/editline]
Also maybe try replacing the bullets in the footer with · (it's a thin interpunct) and setting the global text color to #333333 instead of full black. That should do the trick!
That's such a sexy website.
[QUOTE=TerabyteS_;37313578]I love it! There's just a little issue with the footer, you should try putting a clearfix div before it because right now the iPhone picture is pushing it to the right.
[editline]19th August 2012[/editline]
Also maybe try replacing the bullets in the footer with · (it's a thin interpunct) and setting the global text color to #333333 instead of full black. That should do the trick![/QUOTE]
I didn't even notice that the footer was way off, patched it up and made all the changes!
[QUOTE=Sharpshooter;37313866]I didn't even notice that the footer was way off, patched it up and made all the changes![/QUOTE]
Great! Looks good now!
My personal site; I work on it whenever I feel like it, but I figured I'd post it here too.
[url]http://horsedrowner.net/about[/url] (If you like The Safety Dance, be sure to click "main" too)
I'm at a loss for words right now...I never expected to get that much help from you guys! The website looks amazing and very clean. I could've recreated it but I wanted to throw in my own little twist to it. You guys are awesome.
[QUOTE=Amiga OS;37315746]Toggle buttons without Javascript? What is this sorcery?[/QUOTE]
Disguised checkboxes
Firefox doesn't like them it seems, shame!
Well this is unfortunate. I showed my brother the website and he doesn't think it attracts people's attention good enough, and that before they can scroll down they're already leaving. Apparently it needs a big paypal button and the links need to be at the top...what do? I think this website looks perfectly fine.
Well congratulations you have just ran into one of the main issues in designing for clients, client thinks they are the web designer and they know best, in reality they know nothing. He is providing one sole, single service, to unlock one particular phone model. The website should be simple, the unlock my iphone button could lead to other pages and onto the paypal button, it doesn't need to be any bigger.
He needs to stick to unlocking iphones and let you get on with the website.
[QUOTE=CarLuver69;37316080]Well this is unfortunate. I showed my brother the website and he doesn't think it attracts people's attention good enough, and that before they can scroll down they're already leaving. Apparently it needs a big paypal button and the links need to be at the top...what do? I think this website looks perfectly fine.[/QUOTE]
He should like this then
[IMG]http://gabrielecirulli.com/p/20120819-220722.png[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Sharpshooter;37316136]Well congratulations you have just ran into one of the main issues in designing for clients, client thinks they are the web designer and they know best, in reality they know nothing. He is providing one sole, single service, to unlock one particular phone model. The website should be simple, the unlock my iphone button could lead to other pages and onto the paypal button, it doesn't need to be any bigger.
He needs to stick to unlocking iphones and let you get on with the website.[/QUOTE]
Exactly! He's trying to bring up the points about how eBay ads have flashy colors, all the other unlocker websites are flashy, etc. but he doesn't seem to understand that those websites are flashy because they're doing anything possible to draw attention. This is really annoying.
^^^ Tera, you're awesome. That made my day.
Tera the button at the top needs to be bigger.
In fact just make the entire site one giant Paypal button.
[QUOTE=Emz;37316229]Tera the button at the top needs to be bigger.
In fact just make the entire site one giant Paypal button.[/QUOTE]
I mean, why would you want any information at all if you can just press BUY NOW!!!
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