Critique my WIP Female spy model. - Developers

[QUOTE=Francis;23013957]I hate female spies.[/QUOTE] Wow how amazing some new guy makes an account named Francis and is gonna say he hates everything.

It looks pretty good, but could use some good-old-fashioned southern cooking to put some meat on her bones. *serious face* I would say that she needs for her skirt to be tighter against her waist, not right up against it in a sexual way, just so it doesn't look like a hand-me-down from an older sister.And try to make her shoulders thicker. Other than that, its all good in the neighborhood.

Henry told me to post this. [quote=Henry Townshend]Don't use turbosmooth/meshsmooth. Don't [i]ever[/i] use it. Especially for things you're compiling for ingame. It looks awful with it. There are also some proportional issues I would suggest you fix.[/quote] And I agree with him, the waist and arms are too thin.

If i don't mesh smooth it looks horrible. ESPECIALLY the face.

Updates! Heels, shoulders adjusted, and a beta belt. Enjoy! Should her belt be bigger? [img]http://www.tf2chan.net/projects/src/127804939756.png[/img] [editline]05:51AM[/editline] AND should the coat have those little straps that hold the belt in place?

The smoothing hurts. How does it look without it? Since I [I]really[/I] hope you're not gonna use that smoothed model ingame.

[QUOTE=xxXAcePilotXxx;22999120]Little wider [B]waste[/B] and tits :v:[/QUOTE] :byodood: Some areas look way too high poly, like the feet. Post a wireframe right this instant young man. [QUOTE=KnightLight;22967623]Was kinda hoping for a spy girl who looks more like this: [IMG]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/132/0/2/Take_Your_Cheap_Suit_With_You_by_Komodo_342.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] Likewise. That's a great adaptation actually. It's like a mix of bad assery and sexy... ...ass sexery...

Looks pretty good. There was a Female Sniper floating around somewhere. It was very awesome. But it vanished, so i hope this doesnt go the same way. Keep it up!

[QUOTE=nubblecakes;23049950]Likewise. That's a great adaptation actually. It's like a mix of bad assery and sexy... ...ass sexery...[/QUOTE] As I said, it fits the whole "Female Spy" thing very well for her to be in a dress. Maybe she could wear a theif mask, though, just to make it more coherent with the original spy.

[QUOTE=KnightLight;23052140]As I said, it fits the whole "Female Spy" thing very well for her to be in a dress. Maybe she could wear a theif mask, though, just to make it more coherent with the original spy.[/QUOTE] Putting her in a theif mask would make her look bald. She'll have an eyemask, and she WOULD look nice in a dress, but my machinima has one scene where she strangles someone with her legs, as well as countless other murderous acts that wont work/look normal with a dress.

Pick the face i continue to work on guys. I don't know which to add sexy lips to. [img]http://www.tf2chan.net/projects/src/127811252033.png[/img]

Left is too manly, right's nose is too pointy and looks jewish. Fix that before do anything else. [editline]12:47AM[/editline] And you could save some polys on the forehead on the one on the right.

You should really change those legs and arms to look a little bit thicker, because right now she looks like a twig. Also remember that your cloths aren't glued to her body, so you the limb thickening might help that.

[QUOTE=DrFlanigan;23056433]Putting her in a theif mask would make her look bald. She'll have an eyemask, and she WOULD look nice in a dress, but my machinima has one scene where she strangles someone with her legs, as well as countless other murderous acts that wont work/look normal with a dress.[/QUOTE] I didn't mean a mask like the spy's , I mean one of these: [img]http://www.istockphoto.com/file_thumbview_approve/7949678/2/istockphoto_7949678-bandit-mask.jpg[/img] EDIT: Actually now that I think about it you could also go one step further if you wanted and make it a fancy dress-up party mask...it would fit with the dress, I think... [img]http://www.dancemaniauk.co.uk/fancy_dress/masks/mask3.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.displaycostume.com/store/files/images/large/229024.jpg[/img]

Teal one = win. Would work as a feminine mask on her. :D

She's getting a mask like the ones posted, but not the teal one because she won't be in a dress. The black one or a variation of it would be nice.

Ahh, yeah good point.

2 hours of bloody tweaking and tweaking and TWEAKING I can't get these god damned lips defined. Either they look stupid, or I did all I could and I have to add lipstick and color. [img]http://www.tf2chan.net/projects/src/127820439791.png[/img] [editline]02:34AM[/editline] Screw it, I'm gonna work on shaping the other face, this one looks way too manly.

Lets take a short break from the spy and work on some accessories. Her cigarette holder is pretty much done. [img]http://www.tf2chan.net/projects/src/127828851044.png[/img]

That Cigarette holder looks pretty sweet. Good work,

Her purse which will be in the machinima a few times. May also replace the spies disguise kit. [img]http://www.tf2chan.net/projects/src/127830139640.png[/img]

My sister informs me that this is not a purse, it's called a "Clutch". So yeah, this is her "clutch".

[QUOTE=DrFlanigan;23066982]Pick the face i continue to work on guys. I don't know which to add sexy lips to. [img]http://www.tf2chan.net/projects/src/127811252033.png[/img][/QUOTE] Those are male faces. [editline]10:27AM[/editline] Why can't you just model a new one?

I started modeling a new one. Less poly, completely from scratch.

What do you use when you are modeling? 3DS Max?

[QUOTE=kar-re;23156744]What do you use when you are modeling? 3DS Max?[/QUOTE] Yes why? [editline]09:47PM[/editline] Ra ta ta. I got her face looking pretty alright in my eyes. Nice edge flow, doesn't look like a man, not made from tweaking the tf2 faces... Thoughts? [img]http://www.tf2chan.net/projects/src/127845271252.png[/img]

Looks MUCH more feminine. Good job.

Now I need input on the next thing I'll be working on, her weapons. I know this is a shaving razor, but this is seriously a sexy looking knife. Perhaps I'll make it sharp ended, with a Swiss army knife design. [img]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3356/3409768497_48a0d40f75.jpg[/img] Perhaps something like this. [img]http://images.overstock.com/f/102/3117/8h/www.overstock.com/images/products/L12138649.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=DrFlanigan;23170396]snip[/QUOTE] If neither of those, [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vph3EK-Nmt4]this[/url] would work.

Sorry for the wait, computer finally fixed. Okay no matter what i did, the french twist looked stupid. That, and the fact that I always envisioned the spy as a short haired woman. This is the hair progress so far, brutally critique it. [img]http://www.tf2chan.net/projects/src/127958103237.jpg[/img]