While the brushwork is nice, the texture alignment and placements seem to be, well, horrid.
Every cut in a wall has to have a frame, something that will make it not look like just a hole in the wall. Try cutting back on the detail, do some mapping in dev textures first, see how your brush work will play out, make sure everything works. Then start changing the textures.
A critical thing in maps is to have textures that are aligned. If that ceiling texture was shifted on (from what it looks like) the X-axis about 32 or 64 units, it could be aligned and look nice.
Its not that bad, but a lot of texture issues
Well, at least it's not fullbright, and it has cubemaps. Could do with some better world geometry and texture alignment though, as has been mentioned.
Thanks for the advice everyone.
I've managed make a little sample of the next one I make using your tips.
[media]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/9899/gmfirestructv20000s.jpg[/media]
I'm thinking about removing the "bar" in the middle of the arches here though:
[media]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4408/gmfirestructv20001.jpg[/media]
[media]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/5610/gmfirestructv20002.jpg[/media]
[media]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6853/gmfirestructv20003.jpg[/media]
[QUOTE=Firegod522;18451696]Thanks for the advice everyone.
I've managed make a little sample of the next one I make using your tips.
[media]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/9899/gmfirestructv20000s.jpg[/media]
I'm thinking about removing the "bar" in the middle of the arches here though:
[media]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4408/gmfirestructv20001.jpg[/media]
[media]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/5610/gmfirestructv20002.jpg[/media]
[media]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6853/gmfirestructv20003.jpg[/media][/QUOTE]
Get rid of the grass on the roof.
*sigh* not another construct map.
Also where's the fire?
[QUOTE=Firegod522;18451696]Thanks for the advice everyone.
I've managed make a little sample of the next one I make using your tips.
[/QUOTE]
You obviously failed to notice the tip about doing something original for once then.
Please we need originality these days... it disheartens me when people simply apply a color pallet and make an eerily similar map to another.. (or in this case others)
well pretty nice map. =D
-snip-
NOoot so bad. but still bad
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