WIP - gm_my_house, my first map - Developers

[QUOTE=~ZOMG;24715398]I call troll.[/QUOTE] Holy fucking shit I think I agree with you. I have never seen a map this terrible unless it's a troll map. God damn even my first map was better. If you're really not, then you have a problem.

[QUOTE=gerbile5;24717465]Holy fucking shit I think I agree with you. I have never seen a map this terrible unless it's a troll map. God damn even my first map was better. If you're really not, then you have a problem.[/QUOTE] I love you too

[QUOTE=Wolfie13;24714805]It's [I]not[/I] a good start and a light_environment [I]WON'T[/I] magically make a map look better. Lighting would help here, sure, but adding a light_env willy-nilly will make no difference. The only thing light_environment does is emit light from any face textured with tools/toolsskybox or tools/toolsskybox2d. When you've got no sky, it won't help. Don't give advice if you don't know, don't give advice if :downs: is in session.[/QUOTE] You have to look beyond the fullbright. The repetitive textures symbolise the monotony of his life, it's really quite deep and it's not the OP's fault if went over your head. Bravo OP, bravo.

[QUOTE=Eyefunk;24702276] Oh and turn off motion blur when taking pics.[/QUOTE] Gah sorry, forgot to turn off SharpEye [editline]03:30PM[/editline] [QUOTE=HAKKAR!!!;24717684]You have to look beyond the fullbright. The repetitive textures symbolise the monotony of his life, it's really quite deep and it's not the OP's fault if went over your head. Bravo OP, bravo.[/QUOTE] You didn't even download the map did you...?

[url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=982253[/url] Read this.

[QUOTE=ROFLBURGER;24717699]Gah sorry, forgot to turn off SharpEye [editline]03:30PM[/editline] You didn't even download the map did you...?[/QUOTE] We don't have to download it to know you used bad textures everywhere and it looks plain bad. Read the thread Firegod posted and start from scratch.

[QUOTE=ROFLBURGER;24717639]I love you too[/QUOTE] I could give you some tips I guess. I suppose you don't really know what your doing so I can't blame you. [editline]11:24PM[/editline] I added you on steam figuring I can give you help and toss you a few example VMF's and what not.

my first map was a small room with a breakable metal table and a shotgun it was candlelit too eventually i expanded it so that it had a washroom then i made a displacement and carved it

[QUOTE=cheesecurls;24699466]sigh* fullbright...:argh: what you need: MORE TUOTRIALS PRACTICE(as in work and watch tuts until your good...then realease maps) LIGHT_ENVIORMENT! TEXTURES ARE FUCKED UP SKBOX TEXTURES! DISPLACEMENTS MORE DETAIL caps christ jesus of bethleham! but hell,its your first map....just keep those in mind...try looking up 3kliksphillip his tutorials are very useful[/QUOTE] Wow someone so cereal. Dude, all you need to do is this: -Remove this, or rename it BETA. Honestly this isn't worth garrysmod.org -Add a light_environment -Add lights -Refine your textures! That maze full of the same wall texture was confusing. -Re align mis aligned brushes. -Add doors, detail.

[QUOTE=lolnubs;24724164]Wow someone so cereal. Dude, all you need to do is this: -Remove this, or rename it BETA. Honestly this isn't worth garrysmod.org -Add a light_environment -Add lights -Refine your textures! That maze full of the same wall texture was confusing. -Re align mis aligned brushes. -Add doors, detail.[/QUOTE] This wouldn't regard as alpha. It's over the top and ugly.

Delete the vmf, it's completely stupid and unfixable at this point.