• [2step] It was not worth making this song
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It was not worth making this song, it has 140 bpm 2step drum patterns I made so it's garage 2-step I believe, but less sub bass. I'll put that in later. I stayed up all night making this pos, now I feel all weird and I know I have to sleep eventually uuughh. [url]http://kpence.bandcamp.com/track/im-a-zombie-now[/url] It's really bad.
none of the links work for me :/
Lemme try bandcamp [editline]20th February 2012[/editline] Lemme try bandcamp, that's weird, bandcamp doesn't accept mp3, lemme re-render in wav oh boy [editline]20th February 2012[/editline] What do you recommend for you music fp? Wav or mp3, I've been doing mp3 for some reason. Edit: It's taking quite a while to upload [img]http://screensnapr.com/e/e5LKC9.jpg[/img] :| I can break the ice by critiquing it myself, one of the snare sounds like a dog exhaling through his nose, there's little sub, the bassline dissappears at the some point, there's too much treble. The drums are maybe a little quiet. Poorly mixed [img]http://screensnapr.com/e/Jeo0aF.jpg[/img] So close I can taste it! [editline]20th February 2012[/editline] [url]http://kpence.bandcamp.com/track/im-a-zombie-now[/url] YAY! [editline]20th February 2012[/editline] Chords are strange, I put them in as if they were a sequence of notes but all at once and then it sounds nice.
The main melody was certainly lovely, you just need to get rid of those horrid wobbley things the background, apart from that, this song's pretty good!
[QUOTE=Dead Madman;34788231]The main melody was certainly lovely, you just need to get rid of those horrid wobbley things the background, apart from that, this song's pretty good![/QUOTE] Thanks! Should I get rid of them when become the melody though- nvm I realized that they don't wobble at higher pitch (Its Chromatic wave on massive it sounds pretty weird) I put a lot of filters on the one string sample I nears in the later half so it doesn't sound out of place. It's a big song though so I'm not gonna update yet, just warning people before they mention it. [editline]20th February 2012[/editline] Wow do I feel pathetic, I'm literally f5 ing until I get a response
Kind of cool. I skipped through lots of it because it's 14 minutes, but what I heard was good, apart from towards the end, it gets too jarring and painful on the ears around 10:00-12:00 mark..
[QUOTE=SCopE5000;34788918]Kind of cool. I skipped through lots of it because it's 14 minutes, but what I heard was good, apart from towards the end, it gets too jarring and painful on the ears around 10:00-12:00 mark..[/QUOTE] Okay, I could even just cut that out, it definitely doesn't need to be as long as it is. Is the treble to high? I'm going to cut off the high ends right now, thank you for feeback [editline]20th February 2012[/editline] Jeez, I'm realizing how bad this is
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