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[QUOTE=Xephio;34825814]and heres something ive sacrificed my eyes for the past nights [img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2012/053/e/9/march_with_steel_by_xephio-d4qnb1g.png[/img] too bad i can't go to school now because of how late it is :|[/QUOTE] the dude is really really stumpy and his hands are tiny but i like the effort you put in with the scale. otherwise, composition is pretty unexciting
snip saw it wrong.
[QUOTE=Detlef;34825893]I like to send people on their way to figure out stuff themselves.[/QUOTE] I get that But when a disagreement like the one above happens you need more than cryptic hints to support your side
[QUOTE=ADT;34822767][img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/59476659/works/reference%20sheet%20in%20progress.png[/img] [/QUOTE] The red one is fine, just a slightly big rib cage. But the purple one's anatomy is off with the pose. She's supposedly standing in a contrapposto stance which shifts her wait onto one leg. The leg with the pressure on it(going straight down) should be balancing out the center-line, meaning if you drew a line from the head, straight down, it'll land somewhere on the foot. Try fixing that and you might then see what's wrong with the hips anatomy better. Good example, reversed of yours: [img]http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-caoQz_u0rPQ/TpgBnNfpZ0I/AAAAAAAAAi8/AZ1-NqPVeyY/s400/FashionDrawing2.jpg[/img] And brown guys hips are jutting out just a bit too much, soften that torso to waist transition a bit. Also for composition's sake try switching the position of the red girl and purple girl, just to try it out to see what happens, might look better that way.
the anatomy is wrong and he should study more anatomy in near future. [editline]23rd February 2012[/editline] what is there to argue.
there's nothing to argue but you could be more helpful inthe future.
Just saying it'll be easier for him to see the anatomical mistakes once he fixes the pose. ADT you should just nab some references and work off those for practice before trying out a big piece like this.
[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;34826034]there's nothing to argue but you could be more helpful inthe future.[/QUOTE] I can make comments without writing a detailed critique. I just said the first thing I noticed.
You guys are silly
discussing art in an art thread boy are we silly.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/bRCaL.png[/img] honestly i have no idea how arm muscles work or how they work so i just did random shit [editline]23rd February 2012[/editline] also i seem to have forgotten to shade the hand
[QUOTE=Xephio;34825814]and heres something ive sacrificed my eyes for the past nights [img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2012/053/e/9/march_with_steel_by_xephio-d4qnb1g.png[/img] too bad i can't go to school now because of how late it is :|[/QUOTE] The plate armor has a nice texture but also looks sorta... die-cast. There needs to be more reflection from the ground and sky in certain parts to make it seem more natural. Also it looks like you've used straight black for the shadows which makes it seem charred. Here's a ref [url]http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=1304804&stc=1&d=1313846492[/url] Color of the sky bounces off armor facing up, dirt, grass etc bounces off armor facing down
[QUOTE=Xephio;34825814]and heres something ive sacrificed my eyes for the past nights [img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2012/053/e/9/march_with_steel_by_xephio-d4qnb1g.png[/img] too bad i can't go to school now because of how late it is :|[/QUOTE] How does he bend his elbows? You silly billy
[QUOTE=Maloof?;34826678]How does he bend his elbows? You silly billy[/QUOTE] If you noticed, he doesn't. :v:
[QUOTE=Detlef;34826288]discussing art in an art thread boy are we silly.[/QUOTE] The way you guys beat around the bush is in such stark contrast to the cut throat way my teacher and peers do things I find it funny :v:
I kinda wish that the art teacher that I had used the cut throat approach. She was much too nice. Sometimes you just have to give some one a swift kick in the rear to help them improve. Maybe I'll have more "luck" in college.
Well, I have very cut throat prof for a digital sculpturing class I took for a semester. Being the first and only 'real' art class I have taken so far, I honestly learnt more from him than anything. He can go on for hours on how I can improve my work, which I think is golden. I've taken some summer classes, but there was no feedback at all, just pass or fail.
More doodles. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/4CSOLl.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/M1ec7l.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/EqGMhl.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/nIDBwl.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gBHQKl.jpg[/IMG]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/bvRvc.png[/img] Pretty sloppy; don't really know what I was aiming for here but whatever.
Looks nice, but he doesn't appear to be holding anything on the shotgun? It kinda just looks like a closed fist with the gun sitting on top.
[QUOTE=Anax;34829693][img]http://i.imgur.com/bvRvc.png[/img] Pretty sloppy; don't really know what I was aiming for here but whatever.[/QUOTE] Would it be possible to get this on 1366x768? Or is that the biggest size you have? It looks really cool and wanna put it on my laptop wallpaper cycle
[QUOTE=mr apple;34830290]Would it be possible to get this on 1366x768? Or is that the biggest size you have? It looks really cool and wanna put it on my laptop wallpaper cycle[/QUOTE] [thumb]http://i.imgur.com/HJY8F.png[/thumb] Like that? Also thank you.
decided to do some hand studies tonight [t]http://i.imgur.com/v89lj.png[/t] [t]http://i.imgur.com/RhaKe.png[/t] and yeah, I can do that with my hand and make it walk and act a bit
[QUOTE=Detlef;34826000]the anatomy is wrong and he should study more anatomy in near future. [editline]23rd February 2012[/editline] what is there to argue.[/QUOTE] The problem is that you're not really saying anything that could be useful to me. I still thank you for pointing out my mistake but just going with only a "hurr durr go back to study anatomy" comment isn't helpful to me at all. Also yeah, I try to draw differents kind of shapes for my characters, though that doesn't mean I should draw them with innacurate anatomy
[QUOTE=Martut;34816536] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/mxfS6.png[/IMG] If so, then grats, you have made the funniest cigarette package symbol I have ever seen.[/QUOTE] I'm gonna try hard not to imagine that crocodile doodle when I'm working with that drawing Gonna be a rough time [QUOTE=Back_Slash;34817512]I actually been using that word in regular speech since I was like 15[/QUOTE] Don't worry, it's never too late to learn how to use it correctly! [editline]23rd February 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=Kagrs;34822560]The dof on the edges and the good anatomy makes me think you did a paint-over of a photograph. [IMG]http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-Jv4jRDj2vV8/TdIHDBKHrhI/AAAAAAAAAAc/ZcpqsMW1x4Y/s1600/emma+watson_1.jpg[/IMG] Hmmm.[/QUOTE] Why must people keep doing this shit in this thread They ALWAYS get caught out it's so cringeworthy
Old dog of the sea [img]http://i.cubeupload.com/KZnA6X.png[/img]
[url]http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/[/url] cant stop him from changing things. [editline]23rd February 2012[/editline] I dont really mind that much, it does look loads better when he paints in the stuff I didnt have time to do
[QUOTE=Liem;34806084]All the cool kids are doing poetry We do like Poetry here right? The Endless flicker one thousand Lights The Flames sway in the winds of life Deaths endless gaze piercing the night One more out, One less flame in the fight It burns aways its hours It dances away the years it never runs It never stops It burns right through The frightful night The only destiny of its world the only inevitability of its tiny life is the final day, the final hour when the wind will finally win the flame will flicker its final light It burns aways its hours It dances away the years it never runs It never stops It burns right through The frightful night The wick grows short the flame burns dim the final hour is finally here The flame dies out One less light in the night the flame is gone now the smoke has cleared The flame is now but dust in the wind No one remembers, No one cares It burns aways its hours It dances away the years The flame is gone now Nine hundred ninty nine candles in the night one less candle in the fight[/QUOTE] I think this is the first time this thread has seen good poetry
[QUOTE=Detlef;34831020][url]http://romanticallyapocalyptic.com/[/url] cant stop him from changing things. [editline]23rd February 2012[/editline] I dont really mind that much, it does look loads better when he paints in the stuff I didnt have time to do[/QUOTE] [img]http://i.imgur.com/U7s3s.png[/img] Again suggesting that he made the artwork...
I'm not sure I really like RA much these days, its strayed away from humour and into vague seriousness but I don't feel it has much substance to it. Its pretty, but there isn't much else to it than that.
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