• [Electronic/dubstep] A couple songs im stoked about
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Just finished a song for my friends birthday, and i have been trying a new style out each song kinda. So i wanted to share and maybe fix them a little bit. Any feedback will be appreciated so please C&c. EDIT: Finished album [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/constitutionalized[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/militarism-in-america[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/dancey-stuff[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/another-subfix[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/unto-beginning[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/dance-on-the-floor-whore[/media] CLIPS: [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/good-flow[/media] A remix of one of my songs Remixed by my brother! [media]http://soundcloud.com/fortehcause/runaway-mix[/media] New: [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/fool-the-enraged[/media]
oh wow im p stoked
how old are you
I think the last one sounded best. Keep this up mate.
Your stuff is bloody fantastic, just try to add more low end stuff (EG: Sub basses, etc.) and you could be proffesional producing quality, great work my friend.
You have a really fucking piercing high end on your stuff. Try to EQ some of that stuff out.
[QUOTE]You have a really fucking piercing high end on your stuff. Try to EQ some of that stuff out.[/QUOTE] I thought that I did. I'll roll off the high ends on some instruments, We'll see from there. [QUOTE]how old are you[/QUOTE] Seventeen. [QUOTE]Your stuff is bloody fantastic, just try to add more low end stuff (EG: Sub basses, etc.) and you could be proffesional producing quality, great work my friend. [/QUOTE] Which songs do you think need bass or stonger EQ'ing on the bass? I'm a little bit too Jumbly with low ends. Also thanks for the support.
[QUOTE=FurrFagsMurr;34757550] Which songs do you think need bass or stonger EQ'ing on the bass? I'm a little bit too Jumbly with low ends.[/QUOTE] Well, any song, really. It's not just EQ'ing, you seem to lack any kind of Sub bass at all, just experiment.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/another-subfix[/media] I added more sub, and EQ'd most of the high ends off. some of the sounds might still be a little muddy, I'm having trouble with an instrument near the end. I also changed the tempo to 127 instead of 137.
[QUOTE=FurrFagsMurr;34758397][media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/another-subfix[/media] I added more sub, and EQ'd most of the high ends off. some of the sounds might still be a little muddy, I'm having trouble with an instrument near the end. I also changed the tempo to 127 instead of 137.[/QUOTE] Pretty good, just lower your high end a couple of notches, and it'll be even better, but great job!
Thanks! I JUST finished this song. I think i got a good sound from this one. It keeps reminding me of a video game. [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/dancey-stuff[/media]
Love your stuff keep up the good work
Thanks, heres the new ones [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/militarism-in-america[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/constitutionalized[/media]
Your stuff is amazing, but it's really missing some kind of flow to it, maybe try using sweeps (filtered white noise, etc.) and effects, because I really like your songs, I do, it's just that you need to sustain a constant flow, I'm kind of a hypocrite because my songs don't flow very well, but I'm sure you have the skills to do it!
[QUOTE=Dead Madman;34768549]Your stuff is amazing, but it's really missing some kind of flow to it, maybe try using sweeps (filtered white noise, etc.) and effects, because I really like your songs, I do, it's just that you need to sustain a constant flow, I'm kind of a hypocrite because my songs don't flow very well, but I'm sure you have the skills to do it![/QUOTE] Thanks man! i'll try to make a new track to focus on the effects and maybe some noise, i kinda did that in Constitutionalized to give a sad rainy feeling. Also go Ron Paul! If anyone supports him. Also here is one of my first ableton works. i posted it before but its my personal favorite. as well as my old album CACABEATS [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/go-getum-1[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/joop[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/fearless[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/wee-woo-fuck-me[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/facepunch-rock[/media] First song on ableton: [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/go-berserk[/media]
[QUOTE=FurrFagsMurr;34762872]Thanks! I JUST finished this song. I think i got a good sound from this one. It keeps reminding me of a video game. [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/dancey-stuff[/media][/QUOTE] Tracks like this are so close to being really great. I'm not to sure what's missing though. But it may be a big chunk of the low end explained earlier. But to be honest you could blame that on your speakers or whatever. What are you using to demo your tracks on? Monitor wise.
[QUOTE=The Janitor;34778944]Tracks like this are so close to being really great. I'm not to sure what's missing though. But it may be a big chunk of the low end explained earlier. But to be honest you could blame that on your speakers or whatever. What are you using to demo your tracks on? Monitor wise.[/QUOTE] I'm using Ableton live I'm using two sets of BX1220 altec speakers(fucking limited hertz) And I'm using a Philips MMS171 subwoofer.(limited sub frequencies' plus they aren't meant to be plugged into those speakers so its odd to get the bass right with the speakers frequency) I'm also having a terrible problem with how the sound exports, it always compresses or down tunes my tracks when i upload or export
[QUOTE=FurrFagsMurr;34779667]I'm using Ableton live I'm using two sets of BX1220 altec speakers(fucking limited hertz) And I'm using a Philips MMS171 subwoofer.(limited sub frequencies' plus they aren't meant to be plugged into those speakers so its odd to get the bass right with the speakers frequency) I'm also having a terrible problem with how the sound exports, it always compresses or down tunes my tracks when i upload or export[/QUOTE] If you have a set or a few sets of headphones. Listen to the track through them. Even if you have a car you can put it in. Then make notes and work on the frequencies accordingly. This is easier said than done but do it enough and you will learn you speakers and know how your track should sound, to sound on all speakers.
I have been listening on different speakers and computers and headphones. I'm starting to realize though that i don't have a lot of sub in my songs in general. That and i have a lot of high end sounds... I'm starting on one right now so im going to try and see what i can do with the advice you gave me, thanks a lot! Also I fixed two and added subs. [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/militarism-in-america-submix[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/dancey-stuff-submix[/media] Sounded a little strong to me, waddya think?
BUMP New song that need comments & criticism [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/fool-the-enraged[/media]
[QUOTE=FurrFagsMurr;34812856]BUMP New song that need comments & criticism [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/fool-the-enraged[/media][/QUOTE] Damn it's really cool (and inspiring). Would you consider that complextro?
Thanks! Yeah I didn't know how to categorize it so if you think that's what it sounds like I'll categorize it as Complextro.
BUMP new song I think it reflects on my thrash metal background a little. I played guitar for a 3 years before writing electronic music. I say though it helped me understand scales better [media]http://soundcloud.com/furrfagsmurr/dababol[/media] Also the song key is in E so you can play along with it in standard tuning on guitar
Wow, I really like these, good work!
What program do you use?
[QUOTE=goon165;34849669]What program do you use?[/QUOTE] He already answered for that question. Ableton Live.
Use less skrillexy sounding shit. I liked a lot of them until I heard ROB WOB WOB. And number two is basically Ghosts n Stuff by deadmau5. I'm assuming you listen to both of them a lot. You're shit is really good though. I like it a lot. Only tips I have to offer is avoid the really spastic melodies and the Skrillex burping noises.
[QUOTE=Dankie;34864962]Use less skrillexy sounding shit. I liked a lot of them until I heard ROB WOB WOB. And number two is basically Ghosts n Stuff by deadmau5. I'm assuming you listen to both of them a lot. You're shit is really good though. I like it a lot. Only tips I have to offer is avoid the really spastic melodies and the Skrillex burping noises.[/QUOTE] I think deadmau5 sucks ass, Haha Ghosts'n'stuff does sound really similar! i never listened to the song before. Finally though someone notices that i used a Skrillex-like patch in a couple songs. All the patches were created by me (or recreated) in either operator or massive. I do have quite a bit of spastic melodies, i could work on that for my next track. I'll make a couple more patches. Also which burp noises do you mean?
[QUOTE=FurrFagsMurr;34865409]Stuff[/QUOTE] In "another subfix", 1:30 to 2:00 has the "Burp" noises I'm talking about. It might just be me, but they seem out of place. What I really, really like is the dubstep styled slow down you have at 0:38-0:52. It's fantastic. Add more bass, harder drum lines, more of that slow down stuff, and less burp and you'll have my new favorite song. I don't like deadmau5 very much either, his stuff is very boring and repetitive. 2 minutes of kick clap intro some synths come in song progresses as normal the end -every deadmau5 song.
[QUOTE=FurrFagsMurr;34865409]I think deadmau5 sucks ass, Haha Ghosts'n'stuff does sound really similar! i never listened to the song before.[/QUOTE] "Sucks ass" is pretty strong. I know this is a thread on your music but I'd advise taking a lot from his stuff as even without me being a fan of his music and speaking from a producer's perspective he is one of the best. I'd highly recommend watching some of his ustreams on youtube for just the sheer amount of knowledge he has about music and producing (mind you half is just chatter back to fans).
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