• Romeo and Juliet from Romeo's point of view (original song)
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I used to post music i made here occasionally but then i stopped. Anyway, here's this song i wrote to send to this girl that i like. I played guitar, violin, sang and shook a container full of grain sugar for a shaker sound: [url]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/99892/romeo%20and%20juliet.mp3[/url] [B]Lyrics:[/B] hey juliet come to the balcony open your window, say hello to me i see you every night, you say that tomorrow will be the day, when we will fly away to places new and different i see you've met my friend mercutio he's kind of cool, but kind of silly though he always says that seeing you will be the death of me, but maybe the dead one won't be me we won't have everything, at least we'll have each other and that's fine for me if it's fine for you we can do anything if we have one another please don't cry for me though i cry for you hey juliet i made a big mistake they want to throw me out so i can't be with you don't know what i can do what it will take but i'll see you if its the last thing that i do we won't have everything, at least we'll have each other and that's fine for me if it's fine for you we can do anything if we have one another please don't cry for me though i would die for you [B]It helps if you're familiar with the story of romeo and juliet just fyi[/B]
Why would you make that for a girl you only like Seems a bit over the top
ur a poop
Alright, this is basically what I thought about the song The production quality is great as is the instrumentation and the singing, however I feel that it's all a bit generic. I feel like I've heard the chords and that vocal style a thousand times before. Overall, it's a nice song, though.
ur too generic
[QUOTE=pyrofiliac;23032425]ur too generic[/QUOTE] You handle criticism very well.
u handle criticism very well
I like it. If you added some change in the tones in a middle of a verse the cut to the chorus would have been awesome. But I like the plain idea, also, you play really good.
[QUOTE=pyrofiliac;23036947]u handle criticism very well[/QUOTE] You're a nice person.
validation :D
I really like this! sounds romantic. Needs more variation in the chorus/verses maybe. They look like one.
Wait I'm confused, I thought you were gay. Or you are you bi? That aside, still think it needs some bass.
[QUOTE=Pepin;23072492]Wait I'm confused, I thought you were gay. Or you are you bi? That aside, still think it needs some bass.[/QUOTE] He's gay, although songs about two guys unfortunately lacks public appeal. I liked it, although I swear to god I heard that violin part somewhere else.
I liked it, but I think it needed a stronger chorus. Great job.
[QUOTE=BagMinge101;23073150]He's gay, although songs about two guys unfortunately lacks public appeal. I liked it, although I swear to god I heard that violin part somewhere else.[/QUOTE] wtf im not gay
[QUOTE=pyrofiliac;23088915]wtf im not gay[/QUOTE] Well I'm a bit confused then, unless you mean you are bi. But anyways, this song will be well passed good enough to impress a girl.
This whole it's to generic thing is stupid. It sounds fantastic OP, good production, clean vocals, good playing.
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