doesn't really matter when you only write two words.
fixed
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Its pretty good. Just 2 things, add a little bit going on in the background and if those are NPCS she's aiming at, don't use NPCS. People don't like that
its not an npc laser is the rope
people is a duplicated (sorry but it my first work)
Why does she have two sniper rifles, and why are the people just standing in the middle of the grass? Where are they going? Add a little more movement, ie make it look like they are going some where.
Shoot!
[QUOTE=Kaliber;14651682]Why does she have two sniper rifles, and why are the people just standing in the middle of the grass? Where are they going? Add a little more movement, ie make it look like they are going some where.[/QUOTE]
they wait for heli
2 snipers? Sorry, i've been choosing rifles,and dont delete this one!