• Burning Truck - Yet another test...
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I've been so caught up with school and had little to no free time in the past couple of weeks, so I don't actually have the time to pose anything. This is yet another test of a burning, trashed truck. I don't know how it came out, something is still missing. The original image wasn't meant to be for a pose/edit, so I couldn't quite get a good angle for the fire to show neatly. C&C. [img]https://picload.org/image/rraaidig/burningtruck.jpg[/img] Original: [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/gm_apocalypse00044.jpg[/IMG]
Smoke on the left looks pretty offset, other than that it looks nice.
I quite like the smoke but the fire is way too dark.
Very atmospheric.
Not bad, though it seems that the smoke lacks a consistent quality. Right near the fire it's got a lot of shadows over itself, then it just instantly turns flat. It would look better if you had some more detail across more of the smoke. You could also give it a larger, more gradiated shadow, to help round the smoke out more.
I... Like this so much, yet I don't know why.
I actually like the original better. You went way overboard with the diffuse glow and lost that awesome hazy background.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;25512411]I quite like the smoke but the fire is way too dark.[/QUOTE] Aye. Fire needs more ambient highlighting, especially near the base.
Very neat, Nice effects.
Awesome, I really like the smoke
Isn't the Fire Dept. going to get that?
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