• Dawson the Riot Officer: The Imposter
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[QUOTE]For the past week the sleepy town of Brunswick has had a terrible time with a pest issue of phenomenal proportions. Pink elephants - the nastiest of vermin - have invaded and secured a firm grip upon the town. Their nesting has gone completely out of control - in fact, once this occurs, they are almost impossible to root out. Despite the gravity of the situation help has arrived, for Dawson knows first hand about dealing with pink elephants. Upon arriving at Brunswick, he immediately comes across an odd fellow who seems to be impersonating him... With zero tolerance towards foolish wannabes, Dawson swiftly puts the imposter in his place.[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://i734.photobucket.com/albums/ww343/Firearms_136/Gmod%20Album/Dawsonmeetshisdouble.jpg[/IMG]
I should add that this is the first screenshot of mine to have speech bubbles edited in via GIMP. However I feel that something just doesn't look right about it; maybe it could have worked a little better without 'em. Oh well: you only get better by trial and error. [I]Any suggestions/constructive criticism (if any, that is) will be appreciated and greatly considered.[/I]
ithink yiuur font ize is too small, plus you fitting a bunch of words in little speech bubble d:
[QUOTE=Bubz;35507560]ithink yiuur font ize is too small, plus you fitting a bunch of words in little speech bubble d:[/QUOTE] Ah, very well then - I'll try to avoid compressing paragraphs into small speech bubbles next time. Thank you very much for your advice!
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