"Hopefully I'll Escape The Infection"

[BrokenH3art]

first pose ive done in atleast 8 months. rate C&C. Flames anything just help me get back into things

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[Ding Dong]

Picture is small. Too much contrast. A lot of open space. Pretty crappy camera angle.

I somehow find the sunshine pretty beautiful. :v:

[Eila]

Jumped when i saw the face. Wasnt expecting that.

But nice job.

[oogaboogaman]

I like the heavy contrast. Shows the nice warm feeling the sun is giving off.

[korix]

I think it looks good :) nice colors.

As for criticizing it, I think the boat should be a tiny bit more to the right, and a bit further down in the picture. Also, i think the skull ruins it a bit.
The skull doesn't look nearly as serious as the rest of the scene. In fact i think it looks a bit comical to be honest.
Not your fault, the model is simply not on par with the rest of the scene.
I think you'd do much better if you put a floating body in the water instead, and showed more of the shore.

And above all, it needs to be much bigger, the picture.
Also, i think the heavy contrast is very fitting for the scene.
If you made the picture bigger and added an upper and lower black border, it would look awesome.

[Crazy Knife]

I thought it was all pretty but then i noticed the skull in the lower right and my heart started beating :(

[BrokenH3art]

thanks for the C&C :]
ill work on a different pose tonight

[RamireZ Gmodder]

Quite Nice :)

[bubbagamer]

Face is ridiculous, picture is nice overall but could use a bigger resolution and a lower contrast.

[Gay4Grandad]

You should've shopped a disturbing demon face on making it look as if it's below the water rather than above, because now it looks too comical, but the rest of the picture is all really good, especially the sunset.

[BrokenH3art]

thanks for the c&c im currently posing my next one.