Hello guys!I'm relative new here, but i love Garry's Mod and everything related.So,that's my second comic,i would yo enjoy it.
That's the introduction,it explains the comic history.
[URL=http://img87.imageshack.us/i/vieta1.png/][IMG]http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/5329/vieta1.png[/IMG][/URL]
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And that's the prologue,explains a little bit about the main character.
[URL=http://img808.imageshack.us/i/prlogo.png/][IMG]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/3537/prlogo.png[/IMG][/URL]
I'm finishing the first and the second frame.
Improve the image quality
[QUOTE=minilandstan;26086335]Improve the image quality[/QUOTE]
At least its not a .jpeg
[QUOTE=Steven :D;26086354]At least its not a .jpeg[/QUOTE]
hurr durr jpeg is bad
At least it's not png...wait...
Its too small to read
Not going to read until you switch to jpg. Not willing to wait 10 minutes to see it.
Work on your posing
[editline]20th November 2010[/editline]
[QUOTE=bubbagamer;26181356]Not going to read until you switch to jpg. Not willing to wait 10 minutes to see it.[/QUOTE]
your internet is shit
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your internet is shit[/QUOTE]
Excuse me sir, my connection isn't good enough to load instantly a 3mb fucking png file on the worst picture hosting website ever, Imageshack. Now that you said that, I suggest you pay me a better connection.
Or just get the OP to both switch to jpeg and another host.
May I recommend [url]www.imagehost.org[/url] as a good website for hosting images on?
It took me 5 seconds to load all the pictures, and I don't even have a good internet.
It took me less than 3 seconds and I have a 1mbps connection in [b]AUSTRALIA.[/b]
But really, some of the problems with this comic are the camera angles and the posing. The lighting is also very bad in quite a few scenes, as you cannot see anything. I could not even tell what was going on during the last page.
The speech bubbles also have a very bland glow and there is far too much empty space around the text. There are even many grammar errors prevalent in the comic, mainly on the 2nd and 3rd pages. The gradients on the narration bubbles combined with the coloured text makes it very difficult to read. I also see absolutely no inclusion of full stops.
The comic just has a lot of blatant errors. I suggest you practice more on single screenshots rather than making entire comics.
I can't read this.
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