The Sniper - A Gmod WW2 Movie - Garry's Mod

My movie ive worked really hard on. [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OyiXB8z-7JE[/url]

It's, uhm... Okay... I guess? There's so much wrong with it, I can see english isn't your first language (either that or you're awful at it)... Nah, I'm sorry, this is really not good. It's... just about okay for a first production. Some audio would be nice, stop-motion animation would help a lot. I noticed you got rid of the HUD, which is good, but get rid of the steam popups as well.

Well, I liked it, there's still much to be improved but its good for a beginner. Keep going, improve your English, improve movie making.

Don't use windows movie maker

JgcxCub pretty much got all of it but I will sum it up. -I noticed your Youtube account says you are from Denmark so I understand the English wont be that good. I suggest for the next video, you should use Microsoft word or something similar to check your spelling and grammar. -For such a short video you should add music to it. It would help the mood and make it a lot more appealing to the viewers. - Your camera work needs work. Try using Catmull Cameras, it's easy and allows you to get dolly shots, crane shots ect... - At 1:13-1:14 I noticed a jump cut. A jump cut is pretty much when you put two shots of the same thing of the same angle together, so when it plays it looks like the video is jumping to the next scene. You want to avoid jump cuts as much as possible because they show laziness in a video, - If you want to get a lot more serious about these videos I suggest upgrading to some better video editing software. For someone new like you Sony Vegas would be perfect. That's all I got...

Grammar is key. If you can't type with good grammar people are gonna assume: one that your movie is trash basically, and two your not a mature being. The movie had good scenes but the moving camera tool should to the trick. Try source recorder not Fraps although your frame rate was doing good their it works better with higher quality scenes (explosions, or fast paced chases). Good luck! EDIT: Im sorry I was at a lack of seeing that you are from Denmark. Try not using so much text in your videos then. If you do try keeping it short and let your videos do the talking.

Boring and never use movie maker again. Posing was pretty fine.

almost good, use [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2_iu-Ignu1Y[/url] as a reference to get better

I didn't understand why there are MW2 bodies but DoD heads. If it's WW2 just keep the DoD models lol.

[QUOTE=briggsotis;26179711]almost good, use [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2_iu-Ignu1Y[/url] as a reference to get better[/QUOTE] No, this is absolutely horrible. What kind of man would like to make such shits.

This was not really that bad. I loved the animation that i saw with the gun but the soldiers need to be more realistic and not from COD-MW2. Also i would love to see more detail to what happened before that scene.

Yeah but they are hard to pose, you cannot pose a MP40 on the normal DOD soldier without a big fight, with the Mw2 soldiers you can pose them in 10 seconds without problem. And if you see, i used the soldier with FleckTarn (German Camo) for the Nazi, so it arent so unrealistic.

[QUOTE=Captain Ringo;26126670]you should use Microsoft word[/QUOTE] You mean the Microsoft Word that is probably set up for Danish?

GrEAT MOVIE! :downs:

Too slow paced and steam notifications popping out. Also your posing needs to be better.

[QUOTE=Falchion;26248061]Too slow paced and steam notifications popping out. Also your posing needs to be better.[/QUOTE] Just saying but i would like to see if you can do posing better?

[QUOTE=lilmikkel;26408894]Just saying but i would like to see if you can do posing better?[/QUOTE] That is THE worst argument ANYONE can EVER use. I hope you regret very much saying that, for your own good.

Needs a LOT of improvement.

[QUOTE=simkas;26408941]That is THE worst argument ANYONE can EVER use. I hope you regret very much saying that, for your own good.[/QUOTE] Why? And who called you? Should you come and get involved? I don't think so either..

[QUOTE=lilmikkel;26443058]Why? And who called you? Should you come and get involved? I don't think so either..[/QUOTE] That kind of additude isnt going to get you anywhere on facepunch. Especially the fact that hes been on facepunch 5 more years than you have.

[QUOTE=Araknid;26443368]That kind of additude isnt going to get you anywhere on facepunch. Especially the fact that hes been on facepunch 5 more years than you have.[/QUOTE] Wtf stop comment my movie if you doesnt have anything good to say about it!!!...

[QUOTE=lilmikkel;26446051]Wtf stop comment my movie if you doesnt have anything good to say about it!!!...[/QUOTE] Okay seriously are you specifically trying to pull out the worst arguments anyone can ever use? First, you used the "if you can't do better then you have no right to talk", then you used the "this doesn't involve you so shut up" and no you're using "only talk if you have something positive to say".

Why, oh why do we video section regulars have to keep repeating ourselves. [b]YOU POSTED YOUR VIDEO HERE FOR US TO JUDGE, SO EXPECT CRITICISM. NEVER, EVER, SAY 'herp derp if you don't have anything nice to say about my video, stfu lol.' IF YOU DON'T WANT CRITICISM, DON'T POST IT ON THE INTERNET FOR A LOT OF PEOPLE, MOST OF WHOM ARE A LOT BETTER THAN YOU AT MAKING VIDEOS, TO SEE. USE WHAT WE SAY TO MAKE YOUR VIDEOS BETTER.[/b] :argh:

your attitude stinks. you asked for criticism and now you object it. please leave these video forums. come back when you have learned about constructive criticism.