The rimlighting is really off (especially on the Glock) but everything else is fine. Go easier on the rimlight next time and try make it look less like a smooth gradient.
Faceposing and posing are both superb. Fingerposing is great too.
Nice shadows on the background. Shadows in the foreground are okay too.
Rim-lighting is too soft and large though, as rossum has explained.
The light from the torch on the pistol is too narrow.
I don't get why the lighting on the characters is completely different from the background. They look pasted on, like a movie poster.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;26444446]Faceposing and posing are both superb. Fingerposing is great too.
Nice shadows on the background. Shadows in the foreground are okay too.
Rim-lighting is too soft and large though, as rossum has explained.
The light from the torch on the pistol is too narrow.
I don't get why the lighting on the characters is completely different from the background. They look pasted on, like a movie poster.[/QUOTE]
thanks
its look like a poster because the background - an other picture
Posing looks amazing :)
Especially the parts of them that are touching.
Bear in mind that I could never do the posing myself, but in a photoshop aspect, there are some things I think could be done better. And one posing suggestion.
Zoey's eyes.. They don't look like they're focused on anything, or that there's any emotion in them.
I'd say either make them looking further down (a long with changing her brows), making her seem more disheartened, or make her look somewhere in the direction Nick is looking.
The lighting. It's looks gray, instead of bright. Especially on Zoey's face and Nick's arm.
Flashlight needs to have a wider angle, and softer edges.
The background doesn't have the same contrast levels as the characters, making it look like a poster behind them. I like it's positioning compared to the characters though. Looks cinematic.
Overall I think it's a great picture :)
[QUOTE=korix;26446162]Posing looks amazing :)
Especially the parts of them that are touching.
Bear in mind that I could never do the posing myself, but in a photoshop aspect, there are some things I think could be done better. And one posing suggestion.
Zoey's eyes.. They don't look like they're focused on anything, or that there's any emotion in them.
I'd say either make them looking further down (a long with changing her brows), making her seem more disheartened, or make her look somewhere in the direction Nick is looking.
The lighting. It's looks gray, instead of bright. Especially on Zoey's face and Nick's arm.
Flashlight needs to have a wider angle, and softer edges.
The background doesn't have the same contrast levels as the characters, making it look like a poster behind them. I like it's positioning compared to the characters though. Looks cinematic.
Overall I think it's a great picture :)[/QUOTE]
thx
I actually tried to do so, what looked like a poster
[QUOTE=Notis;26446342]thx
I actually tried to do so, what looked like a poster[/QUOTE]
Really? Well good job then :) But isn't it a very big poster then? :P
I think that, if you wanna make it seem like a poster, it would be wise to show some of the border of it.
That way, the viewer would know they were simply walking through somewhere, and weren't actually in an empty street.
Most awesome however, would be if you could get some abstract zombie shadows to be cast on the whole scene, as if they're trying to walk by somewhere, without getting noticed.
If you put in some yellow/orange color with the shadow, it would look as if they were in a ruined part of the city, with fire on the streets, casting shadows everywhere.
Well, you achieved the 'poster' effect very nicely. The posing - especially the face posing - is excellent. I always have a hard time squeezing any sort of feeling out of these models. I only have one gripe; Nick's finger is on the Glock's trigger. A Glock should not be carried that way unless you're ready to shoot, since it has no safety. That's just a personal issue, though. It doesn't affect the quality in the slightest. I would like to see more of your work in the future.
I hate to ask this, but why is Nick so much lower placed in the picture than Zoey?
[QUOTE=Freakie;26447543]I hate to ask this, but why is Nick so much lower placed in the picture than Zoey?[/QUOTE]
Zoey stand on the Ellis
[QUOTE=Notis;26447795]Zoey stand on the Ellis[/QUOTE]
I hope you mean Nick. :v:
What is it about Nick and Zoey that makes a great pair?
