[list]Posing looks good from what I can tell. That isn't to say that I can tell much.[/list]
[list]Avoid using default CSS weapons, particularly the AK47.[/list]
[list]He's holding the AK wrong.[/list]
[list]What's glowing on the Apache's wing? If it's supposed to be a rocket, the glare should be more orange and, y'know, attached to a rocket.[/list]
[list]Smoke looks okay. A bit spiky, but not bad.[/list]
[list]Muzzleflash looks god-awful.[/list]
[list]I like the list tags.[/list]
Thank's for the feedback, It's currently my second post.
Then it's pretty good for a second, but beware of action shots if you're still easing into posing.
It's a bit hypocritical for me to say that seeing as my first two were both centered around action, but they're proof of this because they both suck. :P
chick with a p90 and a grenade; my first
[img_thumb]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6050/dechateau0000.jpg[/img_thumb]
combine assassin escapes on a rope tied to a helicopter whilst shooting rebels; my second
[img_thumb]http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/1245/zeescape.jpg[/img_thumb]
My first two poses, thumbnailed so they don't distract people. These are for educational value, not advertising. I don't want feedback because I already know they suck; I'm using them to reinforce my point of action being a bad place to start.
Thank's for the feedback.
No shells coming out of the ak47's bolt?
What muzzleflash.
oh wait
[QUOTE=Doc_Fisherman;16526891]No shells coming out of the ak47's bolt?[/QUOTE]
Ejection port, not bolt. The bolt is a different thing.
Get away from da choppah!
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