The Art of Killing

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[img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/177/c/2/art_of_killing_by_antimingebag-d54x77u.jpg[/img]
[url=http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/177/9/2/original_aofk_by_antimingebag-d54x418.jpg]Original[/url]
Yes, I am aware of the fact that he's not holding the hand guard properly, thank you.
Let's say his hands were wet after falling into mud and once he took a shot, AK slipped out (BS and unreal, but that's my excuse).

[Joazzz]

the really weirdly aligned sparks on the muzzleflash kill this for me

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[QUOTE=Joazzz;36484145]the really weirdly aligned sparks on the muzzleflash kill this for me[/QUOTE]
Is it the sparks on lower side of a barrel?
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Fixed (hopefully).

[VaciliNikoMav]

Oh my gosh you did perfect!:rock:

[PREDATORPANTS]

Wonderful work! :) Look forward to seeing more!

[Joazzz]

[QUOTE=RUSSIAN BEAR;36484265]Is it the sparks on lower side of a barrel?
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Fixed (hopefully).[/QUOTE]

yeah, those, and they're still all messed up

it looks like they're coming from either the lower or the upper right edge of the picture because of the direction of the motion blur

also, noticed the same issue with the grey stuff on the left side, above the dust explosion

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Rotated and changed direction of motion blur to left-to-right.
Blurred the "grey stuff" (just a separate layer of dust on top of explosion).
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I think it'll be better if I just leave it at this and not touch it. Or I'll screw something else up =).

[Kali]

Looks good to me, the only things that bug me are things only a gun nerd would pick up on.

Like how the fire selector is set to semi automatic, but he seems to be firing full auto, and how the bolt handle on the model is clipping through the gun's body.

[Joazzz]

[QUOTE=RUSSIAN BEAR;36485701]Rotated and changed direction of motion blur to left-to-right.
Blurred the "grey stuff" (just a separate layer of dust on top of explosion).
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I think it'll be better if I just leave it at this and not touch it. Or I'll screw something else up =).[/QUOTE]
much better now

[Rick VIce]

Not really giving much effort to hold the gun :v:

I like the shell casings tho.

[AFewOstriches]

Really well done, mate. Finger posing on both hands needs work, but the effects are sexy.