My thrid attempt of a screenshot ("Brutal" mob execution)

[Vinze]

This time I skipped editing it, since the previous attempts screwed up bigtime ._.

Some nice critisism would be nice, please don't be too harsh.

[img]http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/4249/rpdowntownv2fiend0002.jpg[/img]

[Rastifan]

In game blood is always ugly. But it will have to do until people can get comfortable with editing. Like here you could try to blur it a bit. It will look better. Posing is ok and I notice decent finger posing after just three times. Kudos for that.

[Vinze]

[QUOTE=Rastifan;20774761]In game blood is always ugly. But it will have to do until people can get comfortable with editing. Like here you could try to blur it a bit. It will look better. Posing is ok and I notice decent finger posing after just three times. Kudos for that.[/QUOTE]

I really appriciate the kudos, last time I tried... Well... It was very kudos-free (Note to self: Morph is not as cool as it may seem), also, about the blur, how's this:
[img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/9366/rpdowntownv2fiend0001.jpg[/img]
...?

[fuckingprodigy]

The posing of the gun doesn't look natural. Have him aim the gun in a diagonal fashion.

Other than that, it looks good for no edits.

[executed rat]

Use FEAR blood sprites and decals. Also posing... uh... well, you know.

[Ding Dong]

Posing is off.

[Vinze]

[QUOTE=exhale77;20781262]Posing is off.[/QUOTE]

Anyone in specific? Or all of them? Some pointers would be nice, I'd really like to be "good" at this >_<.

[TH89]

Breen might want to move.

[Ronin]

They all look like they have a broomstick shoved up their ass. Try to make them seem more relaxed. And the posing of the... Weird looking guy with the gun is really funky.

[Vinze]

[QUOTE=BANNED USER;20784446]They all look like they have a broomstick shoved up their ass. Try to make them seem more relaxed. And the posing of the... Weird looking guy with the gun is really funky.[/QUOTE]

I'll work on that, but since I'm still learning, I'm at the level where either they are looking like propped-up corpses, or stiff people >_<.

[H3llfire741]

he's pointing the gun wrong if hes trying to kill odessa
high probability hes going to hit breen instead, like th89 said "breen might want to move"

[Ghostwork]

[QUOTE=TH89;20783848]Breen might want to move.[/QUOTE]

Look at how the blood from the other guy is above the dumpsters.

He's got nothing to worry about in those physics.

[Tiggerr]

i guess that's what happens when you don't secure a place good enough, poor guy learned it the hard way

[Butterkinfe]

The blood splatter on the wall is off but overall i like this picture.