• Artistic images - single word collaboration
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I decided I wanted to make some pictures that I could describe in one word, so here I am; I've posted the first ten images now, but more will come. Expect at least 3 more by the end of the tomorrow. Possibly a few more today. Pictures so far; Frost: [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Frost.png[/img] Escape: [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Escape.png[/img] Clear: [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Clear.png[/img] All images were made and posed in Garry's mod, then later edited in photoshop. [b]EDIT:[/b] Aurora: (Taken in cs_office believe it or not) [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Aurora.png[/img] Four: (Not too artsy, more just cool) [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/4.png[/img] Inhuman?: [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Inhuman.png[/img] Consumption: [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Consumption.png[/img] Freedom: [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Freedom.png[/img] Contact: [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Contact.png[/img] Superior: [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Bye.png[/img] Crash: (Not too happy about this one) [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Crash.png[/img] Post/rate your opinion. :v:
You suck dick. [highlight](User was permabanned for this post ("Troll" - Uberslug))[/highlight]
'Escape' needs AA really badly.
[QUOTE=I've Been Banned;17021714]You suck dick.[/QUOTE] The door, get out it. Also some are really artistic but need posing tweaks.
[QUOTE=I've Been Banned;17021714]You suck dick.[/QUOTE] Well, any ideas on how I can improve then?
I actually like the last one,with the car crash.
I liked most of them, altough some needs some posing tweeks
[QUOTE=777ecnatsiser;17022579]I liked most of them, altough some needs some posing tweeks[/QUOTE] Posing is hard, but I can't say I didn't use time on it. If only there was an easier system... [editline]05:25PM[/editline] Added another image. Possibly the last one today. Might do another today, but I'll defiantly continue tomorrow.
looks cool =D [editline]04:52PM[/editline] [QUOTE=I've Been Banned;17021714]You suck dick.[/QUOTE] whats bad about it? nothing.
[QUOTE=777ecnatsiser;17022579]I liked most of them, altough some needs some posing tweeks[/QUOTE] Which images?
Superior, Contact and Inhuman are the best in my opinion but Inhuman could use with a sort of darkening effect ;)
[QUOTE=shivhead3000;17026960]Inhuman could use with a sort of darkening effect ;)[/QUOTE] Like the one I added?
[QUOTE=ZemogT;17027042]Like the one I added?[/QUOTE] Yea that's allot better :D
What color tint did you use for CS_Office?
[QUOTE=F T;17027214]What color tint did you use for CS_Office?[/QUOTE] Post processing effects: Red contrast, slight bloom, darker, tiny blur, lower FOV. Photoshop effects: Aurora Borealis sky accompanied by blue mountains that fit the FOV of the image. A few other effects, a bit cropping and cutting. -Rain; Pointilize, threshold, invert, screen, radial blur zoom. [editline]09:32PM[/editline] Photoshop has this weird error where none of the tools are working, yet I could still move around the canvas with the hand tool - I decided that was a nice place to cut for the day - any help regarding that subject appreciated.
Woah, pretty cool! Love'em!! :D
[QUOTE=I've Been Banned;17021714]You suck dick. [highlight](User was permabanned for this post ("Troll" - Uberslug))[/highlight][/QUOTE] what's the point to create an account just to be banned? anyway i like pretty much all of them..... although the Consumption's blood looks a bit too....lightish?
[QUOTE=DEMONSKUL;17029074]what's the point to create an account just to be banned? anyway i like pretty much all of them..... although the Consumption's blood looks a bit too....lightish?[/QUOTE] I had made an alternete version with a bit darker blood. Here it is; [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/Consumption2.png[/img] [editline]10:07PM[/editline] Also, I might add this; [img]https://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1467131/Poses/BLIZZARD.png[/img] - I take NO CREDIT for the posing. It is simply a modified version of the picture located here: [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?p=17029169[/url]
I like the new effect you've added to Consumption. Looks a bit more Gothic in a way.
I wouldn't call any of these artistic. A couple are okay, a couple are posed quite badly and a couple just strike me as pretentious.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;17030082]I wouldn't call any of these artistic. A couple are okay, a couple are posed quite badly and a couple just strike me as pretentious.[/QUOTE] How so?
[QUOTE=ZemogT;17024735]Which images?[/QUOTE] The one where it has 2 soliders "Clear"
[QUOTE=ZemogT;17039280]How so?[/QUOTE] Just looks to me like over-elaborate colour mod with some titles slapped onto the pictures and nothing more. "Clear" is reeeeally badly posed.
[QUOTE=777ecnatsiser;17039820]The one where it has 2 soliders "Clear"[/QUOTE] Meh, I tried.
Here's what I think could be improved. Frost: It would be good to have the blue, icy effect in the refletion as well... Escape: Maybe add a really bright glow to the white and some sort of slight motion blur Clear: A little vertical wave effect at the bottom and maybe a muzzelflash on the guy behind! Aurora: Darken the top quite a bit and the bottom just a quarter Four/Inhuman: Dunno... Consumption (Both): The red needs to be more intense. Blur out the foreground a lil! Freedom: You could have noticed that the smoke was from another image. Try effects like Painting/Drawring to make it have the same level of 'cartoony-ness' as the rest of the image. Contact:Not much to say about it Superior: Add more bloom/brightness on the explosion Crash: Sparks maybe? Motion blur on the back of the car and sharpen in the middle (point of impact) Last unnamed one: Because the focus is on the character you should blur out the houses in the background! I only wrote the stuff that can be improved and no good stuff. Dont take it badly :)
No, no. Don't worry. It's much appreciated. :v: - I'll take them into consideration. I even agree to most of your improvements myself.
Aurora is nice. I like it.
I like 'em all.
Should I add more or just let it be?
Well?
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