Just trying out Garrys mod and getting used to the tools.
Any advice/tips/ideas are appreciated!
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Really good concept, execution of it is quite bad. Rated artistic, nonetheless. Posing is quite fine.
Would you say move the characters to the left slightly (rule of thirds), and reduce the jagging in the palm trees and bring the dropship closer?
Looking at it more and more I start to notice things I should of at the time!
That water reflection looks horrible, the rest isn't that bad.
[editline]6th November 2012[/editline]
[QUOTE=Sparrow_Hawk;38344802]Looking at it more and more I start to notice things I should of at the time![/QUOTE]
Like the low poly rocks?
would have been better if you cropped out everything left of D0G and the trees he's hanging from
I don't like that B&W filter,a blue sky would look better IMO.
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