I made a new Youtube account for this series, it's the first time I've tried my luck at a Gmod Film, try it out though, it may be better than you think.
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Blu93QZcCs[/url]
What did I just watch...?
All the 'skits' were just people staring off into space, and the only one that didn't do that, the pokemon one, was far too slow and boring.
This hole random skit thing is just old now.
Your copying things from other Gmod videos... This video is unfunny and unoriginal. The only thing that would of made it worst would be if you used Dr Hax and claimed it as your own as many do.
We need more serious Gmod films like Lit fuse does.
"I own all the music in this video...." WHAT?! that's not true at all.
And also don't render in 320x240P
I didn't steal any of the ideas from other videos. Yes this was my first video and it probably sucked. Thanks for the constructive critism guys.
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[QUOTE=Itspabs2;27920027]I didn't steal any of the ideas from other videos. Yes this was my first video and it probably sucked. Thanks for the constructive critism guys.[/QUOTE]
The video static part is stolen, For one.
[QUOTE=Best4bond;27948462]The video static part is stolen, For one.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, thats a really creative idea to "steal". I'm sure whoever I stole it from, (sense there are so many who use it.) did not get the idea themselves.
Now, I did not "steal" anything else.
Thanks for being mature and giving me some ideas.
Holy shit
not really this video made me want to cut out my eyes with a box cutter very slowly
If you really want some ideas... Next time stay away from what you call "Comedy" and go towards something serious, Like a Drama Gmod video, Do voices for it yourself (If your too young for voices, you too young for video games as Half life 2 is rated MA-15+)
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[QUOTE=Best4bond;27948462]The video static part is stolen, For one.[/QUOTE]
actually the static part [i guess you mean the transition thingy] is from "robot chicken", as the earliest place i saw this in.
and also, i think its ok for a first video, i mean the filming is good, so you got the right idea how to film. Now all you need is to come up with some more ideas, and get this thing rolling.
good luck..
oh and this is my first post here, hello guys =]
Actually, it's your second post.
Ello gov.
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actually the static part [i guess you mean the transition thingy] is from "robot chicken", as the earliest place i saw this in.
and also, i think its ok for a first video, i mean the filming is good, so you got the right idea how to film. Now all you need is to come up with some more ideas, and get this thing rolling.
good luck..
oh and this is my first post here, hello guys =][/QUOTE]
Thanks man, I guess you understand that this is my first video.
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[QUOTE=Best4bond;28023113]If you really want some ideas... Next time stay away from what you call "Comedy" and go towards something serious, Like a Drama Gmod video, Do voices for it yourself (If your too young for voices, you too young for video games as Half life 2 is rated MA-15+)[/QUOTE]
I guess your videos aren't serious, sense I find none of them serious at all. And, I did all the voices in my video, except one that my friend helped with.
Here's some tips my friend:
- Use Catmull cameras (can be found on garrysmod.org)
- Come up with more original ideas
- Try something else other then comedy
- People starring isn't funny
- Write a script
- When doing voice acting don't be so monotone man. Where's your enthusiasm?
[QUOTE=Captain Ringo;28038168]Here's some tips my friend:
- Use Catmull cameras (can be found on garrysmod.org)
- Come up with more original ideas
- Try something else other then comedy
- People starring isn't funny
- Write a script
- When doing voice acting don't be so monotone man. Where's your enthusiasm?[/QUOTE]
Thanks man, the voice in the pokemon scene thing was supposed to be monotone.
Still, the rest of them weren't very interesting.
I don't like it. Just don't make "random-short" videos like this.
(you're banned already?)
"A bunch of random clips made in Garry's mod."
And calling it Machinima, just had to watch:v:
