Finally got Photo-shop, been learning some new effects. This is my third picture here posted on Facepunch. :dance: This picture is of a S.W.A.T. member shooting.
[b]BLURRED VERSION[/b]
[IMG]http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/rr62/a007lex1/soildershootingv1Blurred.jpg[/IMG]
[b]NO BLUR VERSION[/b]
[IMG]http://i470.photobucket.com/albums/rr62/a007lex1/soildershootingv1.jpg[/IMG]
C&C Please. :cheers:
No blur version is better, but the model and weapon look clay-ish.
[QUOTE=Akita;17414614]No blur version is better, but the model and weapon look clay-ish.[/QUOTE]
Didn't really feel like finding new models, had to stick with the low-res(ish) Counter-Strike Source ones.
The hand positioning is really bad. Take a moment to think about your posing and visualise a real person in your pose. Even better, use reference pictures or stand up and do the pose yourself and think about where every body part is (okay... not [i]every[/i] body part).
As for the editing, look at Vman's GIMP tutorial for how to do smoke and muzzleflashes and remember this:
Blurring entire pictures does not look good.
Finally, get some custom models and/or skins.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;17414741]The hand positioning is really bad. Take a moment to think about your posing and visualise a real person in your pose. Even better, use reference pictures or stand up and do the pose yourself and think about where every body part is (okay... not [i]every[/i] body part).
As for the editing, look at Vman's GIMP tutorial for how to do smoke and muzzleflashes and remember this:
Blurring and entire pictures does not look good.
Finally, get some custom models and/or skins.[/QUOTE]
Will do sir! Thank you for the criticism.
Muzzle flash isn't that good.
Wow, I have to improve more then I thought. :v:
Try making an assault rifle muzzle flash a bit like this:
[img]http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/250/muzzlef2hf1.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Akita;17415196]Try making an assault rifle muzzle flash a bit like this:
[img]http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/250/muzzlef2hf1.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
Will do. Does anyone thinks the picture is even OKAY?
Its better than Ok. Not by far, but it beats most of the people's poses. (Not including super-posers)
I wouldn't recommend using that muzzleflash exactly. It's quite overused.
[QUOTE=Akita;17415236]Its better than Ok. Not by far, but it beats most of the people's poses. (Not including super-posers)[/QUOTE]
Okay thanks! I will try my best to improve.
The Tactical Weapons Pack has lots of nice weapon models.
[QUOTE=PrismatexV7;17415289]The Tactical Weapons Pack has lots of nice weapon models.[/QUOTE]
I'll remember that, could you give me a link?
[url]http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=60980[/url]
Lots of nice stuff, from AK-47s to M14s and back.
[QUOTE=PrismatexV7;17415393][url]http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=60980[/url]
Lots of nice stuff, from AK-47s to M14s and back.[/QUOTE]
Sweet, thank you very much!
And check out Larry's Weapon pack, it has lots and lots of weapon models.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;17414741]The hand positioning is really bad. Take a moment to think about your posing and visualise a real person in your pose. Even better, use reference pictures or stand up and do the pose yourself and think about where every body part is (okay... not [i]every[/i] body part).
As for the editing, look at Vman's GIMP tutorial for how to do smoke and muzzleflashes and remember this:
Blurring entire pictures does not look good.
Finally, get some custom models and/or skins.[/QUOTE]
Could you possibly link me to the Tutorial thread?
I like it, but I don't like the standard models :(
the shells are a cool
Smoke on the shells is not good. It shouldn't be going up, it should be angled at the ejection port.
Exhale is a model example of how to take criticism.
And honestly, I think the picture is rather engaging.
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