C&C Please. I need to know what i have to improve on in the future
I tried to go for a sort of calming sort of scene
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/office1.jpg[/img]
Scene build looks nice, what map is that btw?
Hospital from L4D. I like that awesome skybox so i decided to make this
Looks like something from L4D.
And good scene build.
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Don't post while I do damnit! :argh:
It looks nice.
Was going to say a bit dark, but I don't know really. Very moody. I like it.
Perhaps a dim light in the ceiling somewhere. Just to add a little light, but not much.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;17565469]Was going to say a bit dark, but I don't know really. Very moody. I like it.
Perhaps a dim light in the ceiling somewhere. Just to add a little light, but not much.[/QUOTE]
The computer is giving a dim light. c:
Looking really.. peacefull.
Awesome man.
Only thing Is the windows a tad big.
Mind uploading the original so I can edit it?
[QUOTE=Zeraxify;17566210]Mind uploading the original so I can edit it?[/QUOTE]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/l4d_hospital04_interior_dark00111.jpg[/img]
Is that an amaria industry logo on the computer?
I like it. :v:
But the low-res building and where the skybox drasitcally changes colours ruins it. :(
Not bad. Low-res skybox is a little ugly though.
[media]http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/553/office1.jpg[/media]
A Couple of touches I made:
Got rid of the ugly lit windows in the building
Fixed up the coffee mug
And fixed the color of the florescent lights
I thought it was an NPC for a second.
If you want us to judge how to get better, maybe take a picture of somebody doing something more than standing and in better lighting conditions. Looks alright for now, though.
[QUOTE=ssa gib A;17572796]I thought it was an NPC for a second.[/QUOTE]
Looks like a player to me.
Good pic, but I don't like that lighting, just a personal preference. S'good though.
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