Raptor's "SKIN OF THE DEAD" Focused On Redman.....Part I

[redman23]

i love Raptor Comics But There's only 5 perskin in his comics.....What about the others?
Here we have side story of Raptor's "SKIN OF THE DEAD"
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[highlight] Features [/highlight]
- Me
- Alex Shadow
- Zombie
- Pillow
- My Ugly Grammar
- Nicaraguian Coffee
- And Aaron as Aaron
[b]I STILL WORKING ON MY GRAMMAR.....DO YOU UNDERSTAND LEBOWSKI?[/b]
Have fun

*little update*
For who have not Understand...The Falling Tv is the same as that Srgt launched from the roof in the Part one of Raptor's Comics

[raptorfromswede]

haha awesome man!

[Minimole]

Look's good man I don't know why you were kicked out of our thread.

[Chonch]

I'm pretty sure the reason Raptor's comic only includes 4-5 people is because they were all in a private L4D2 game together once.

As for the comic; posing is decent and jokes are predictable yet funny. Good work. Only one thing is bothering me, and it's probably because I didn't read the comic thoroughly enough. Who are "Alex Shadow" and "Pillow"?

[redman23]

[QUOTE=Sie-Sveinhund;28391997]I'm pretty sure the reason Raptor's comic only includes 4-5 people is because they were all in a private L4D2 game together once.

As for the comic; posing is decent and jokes are predictable yet funny. Good work. Only one thing is bothering me, and it's probably because I didn't read the comic thoroughly enough. Who are "Alex Shadow" and "Pillow"?[/QUOTE]
Alex Shadow is my Friend in Real Life (he's the Vampire Guy in the Bed) and Pillow is the Pillow....
Anyway Thanks

[Hollywood SN]

I like it.

It could be better but i like it.

[LetsGroove]

I've got to admit, I found the humor cute and funny. The layout could be improved, and the pictures should be larger so it's easier to read.

[redman23]

i working on Size..But for layout i dunno cause Comics Life have Those Panel..But i will try to find a Way to do better :buddy:

[Cl0cK]

Also make your speech bubbles bigger so the text doesn't touch its borders, and just make your whole layout bigger too.

But, still a nice comic!

[Griffo619]

Nice Scott Pilgrim Vs. The World reference!

[redman23]

DIN-DIN-DIN you find it!!

[MerzBro]

Is your personal skin intentionally really dumb looking? He looks like a mime with some sort of disease.

Also your sound effects are quite strange. I didn't know that zombie faces made a "tunp" sound when you hit them.

[redman23]

1. is a fucking Vampire (not from twilight)
2. trow a pillow on somone face and you will hear the "tump"
also.....what a dick

[MurderZ]

Damned zombie didn't even accept your delicious coffee, how rude! And then he ran off with it! Even worse! He needs to make up his mind!!

[redman23]

Yea..you offer them a cup of Nicaraguian coffe....and they not accepted