[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rc9fvwUbgk4[/media]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/Memories.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/JACKHURRY.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/crashin.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/falling1.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/Crashed.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/holdin.jpg[/img]
Much more sombre followup to the Cyberpunk series(and hardest to make).
[b]Notes[/b]
-Edit's are so minor that "The Combine" will prolly call me out on it
-If you didn't get the story, Jack and Jessica had fucked up some of the Corps bases, and escaped, but were tailed, and crashed, putting jessica into a long coma, while Jack is still alive and so is jessica(Her implants healed her) She's still unconcious, and jack lost use of his right eye.
-[highlight]No that is not the same guy as the tortured police officer, i have limited models.[/highlight]
-Yes those are Dystopia/sin models/maps
-Ben i only rip you off because i CARE
Chronologically ordered issues:
[url=http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=830182]Issue 1[/url]
[url=http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=829978]Issue 2[/url]
[url=http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=830180]Issue 3[/url]
"Memories" Issues:
[url=http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=829346]Issue 1[/url]
The way his eye is closed is a little odd.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;17860425]The way his eye is closed is a little odd.[/QUOTE]
I couldn't make any convincing effects to make it look like he's lost use of that eye.
Critism time mah boi.
-->The posing is very odd in some pictures(Im reffering to the first and last)
-->The Editing is very odd(Im reffering to the Motion Blur on the tires but atleast you edited something)
-->The Eye is creepy
-->Do you have all your graphics to max cause everything looks really low res
The good things:
-->Idea
-->Models
Happy Greetings
The Combine
[QUOTE=The Combine;17860668]Critism time mah boi.
-->The posing is very odd in some pictures(Im reffering to the first and last)
-->The Editing is very odd(Im reffering to the Motion Blur on the tires but atleast you edited something)
-->The Eye is creepy
-->Do you have all your graphics to max cause everything looks really low res
The good things:
-->Idea
-->Models
Happy Greetings
The Combine[/QUOTE]
I have my graphics to the very max
Than its okay.
Just improve your editing,posing and map choice.
Lol @ the random wooden door propped up as a ramp in a heavy industrial environment that can somehow take the weight of a car.
I couldn't figure out the door either:)
Lol I just saw the random door there.
it's a part of the map.
I use remover if there are any unwanted props in the map in question. Not all props can be removed that way though.
That's my point, i found it and thought it might be useful
And then the man was a zombie.
Haha.
How?...
Ohh I forgot floating doors obviously can work as a ramp for heavy cars.
Weird posing and needs a better editing on the motion.
[QUOTE=Santz;17861472]How?...
Ohh I forgot floating doors obviously can work as a ramp for heavy cars.
Weird posing and needs a better editing on the motion.[/QUOTE]
It IS carbon fibre.
[QUOTE=Firemasheen;17860339]-Ben i only rip you off because i CARE.[/QUOTE]
*Standing in the rain* [b]COWAAAAARD![/b]
[sp]/lolschoolties[/sp]
Atleast i make poses of a faith about to be sliced open and of a ko'd jessica not zoey the lesbo
[QUOTE=Firemasheen;17863856]Atleast i make poses of a faith about to be sliced open and of a ko'd jessica not zoey the lesbo[/QUOTE]
I didn't make her lesbian. That would be your perception. :)
I am twisted.
Anyone got CC?
Since you handle criticism like an argument, I gonna be a dick for the first time here on Facepunch.
Isn't it illegal to have that Faith model? (Mirrors edge is not a source game). I mean since you made an ass of your self trying to police others on downloading models for GMod.
They're decent. Angles on the characters aren't that great though.
Also, [sp]this guy is deathbucket[/sp]
-Doesn't Make sense. (Door ramp?)
-The stuff that actually took skill to pose (People i.e. first and last shot) are poorly done.
-Don't take criticism as an argument and reply to it/police people for it.
Overall: Not good.
Deathbucket is still alive? [b]KILL IT WITH FIRE[/b]
[QUOTE=The Combine;17885050]Deathbucket is still alive? [b]KILL IT WITH FIRE[/b][/QUOTE]
Meh, at least he's been improving from the looks of his recent work.
But he still cant take critism and is flaming my threads.
I hate him.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;17884604]Since you handle criticism like an argument, I gonna be a dick for the first time here on Facepunch.
Isn't it illegal to have that Faith model? (Mirrors edge is not a source game). I mean since you made an ass of your self trying to police others on downloading models for GMod.[/QUOTE]
I realize i was wrong(Ritual are dead so they don't care about SIN) but jesus h christ you're in the wrong thread.
[editline]10:33PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=The Combine;17885104]But he still cant take critism and is flaming my threads.
I hate him.[/QUOTE]
Because you type like a fucking loony hopped up on all kinds of pills who's also jamming a fork in his fucking keyboard.
[QUOTE=Firemasheen;17885181]
Because you type like a fucking loony hopped up on all kinds of pills who's also jamming a fork in his fucking keyboard.[/QUOTE]
Problem Officer?
Deathbucket? This is spooky. At least the posing isn't bad.
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