Ive not played with Gmod for over a year and here is my 1st attempt at a comic, hope you enjoy..
Please remember this is called "Head Shot"..
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/1st.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/2nd.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/3rd.jpg[/IMG]
Idea is... well, okay. The posing is pretty bad, could use a lot of work. The text also kinda ruin it, loose it.
Try practicing some more, and then come back here.
I see potential in your humor. Just get your grammar a bit better, and edit it, don't use paint for the text. Still though, I reckon you could become good. Keep trying!
In the first picture... is scout jerking off?
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Oh. [I]Head[/I] shot.
[editline]12:23PM[/editline]
:ms:
What is this I'm looking at?
[QUOTE=geogzm;21401983]I see potential in your humor. Just get your grammar a bit better, and edit it, don't use paint for the text. Still though, I reckon you could become good. Keep trying![/QUOTE]
What he said.
I was like ah? then read the title and the text again and started laughing.
The posing is not bad but the text could be alot better.
oh i get it
haha
How old are you?
I know the characters could of been better, but its just a quickie. I mean my old stuff was better, here have a look but I didn't know about effects and stuff..
My 1st go was "Pyramid", like i said i didn't know about about what effects I could have. I have the pyro riding his flamethrower-bike while on holiday..
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/pyramid3.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/pyramid7.jpg[/IMG]
2nd go was called "Pyramid Oops", pyro again riding his flamethrower bike, but his turbo kicks in as he hits a critz (again i didn't know about what effects i could have).
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/pyrocritz1.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/pyrocritz2.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/pyrocritz3.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/pyrocritz4.jpg[/IMG]
3rd go was called "No Brakes" with the pyro riding his flamethrower-bike again but this time stealing the case, then finds out the only brake is a wall..
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/ouch03.jpg[/IMG]
I have the Heavy who cant look and a sniper who drops his rifle to catch the case.
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/ouch07.jpg[/IMG]
"Gentle Persuation" Here we have the heavy gentley persuading the Scout to give back his sandvich.
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/gentlepersuation.jpg[/IMG]
Now my big favourite is called "Fishing with Friends" Heavy has took his friends fishing, say no more..
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/fishingwithfriends1.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/fishingwithfriends2.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://homepage.ntlworld.com/opollo/comic/fishingwithfriends3.jpg[/IMG]
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