• Man standing in woods.
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Or, my prefered title, "I Have Become Lost to the World". This is a picture I became inspired to make after hearing the song by Gustav Mahler, to the text of a poem by Friedrich Rückert. I don't think I did it much justice, however..... [IMG]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/7872/iamlosttotheworld.jpg[/IMG] Poem: I have become lost to the world, With which I used to waste so much time; It has heard nothing from me for so long, That it may well believe that I have died! I do not care at all, If it considers me dead. I also cannot contradict it, For really I have died, Died to the world. I have died to the world's turmoil, And I rest in a silent domain. I live alone in my heaven, In my love, in my song! And song by Mahler: [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p8M6XLLDJW4[/url] Not much more to say, I might try remaking it without it being so bland in the future.
The way his head is titled to the side looks quite odd and unnatural... like he has pulled a nerve or something. The desaturated style is cool though.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;21522336]The way his head is titled to the side looks quite odd and unnatural... like he has pulled a nerve or something. The desaturated style is cool though.[/QUOTE] Yeah, I was trying to him look depressed but simply made him look like he was attacked by an animal in those woods.
First thing I noticed was the desperat need of AA.
[QUOTE=Tovleman;21538857]First thing I noticed was the desperat need of AA.[/QUOTE] really well you must have some mighty fine corrective eye surgery done first thing i noticed was crooked neck [editline]02:39AM[/editline] also, did you inflate his head just a bit?
I just spent about 5 minutes trying to find Slender Man in there.
[QUOTE=Reno360;21542707]I just spent about 5 minutes trying to find Slender Man in there.[/QUOTE] Lol, nope, no SlenderMan. [editline]02:49AM[/editline] [QUOTE=bepassley;21538936]really well you must have some mighty fine corrective eye surgery done first thing i noticed was crooked neck [editline]02:39AM[/editline] also, did you inflate his head just a bit?[/QUOTE] No, his head is just a little big. I think the model is simply a reskin of Breen's body with a citizen head on it.
You need to work on your poetry, nobody likes the kind lacking rhyme unless it was written a few hundred years ago back when English was awesome. Also, might wanna turn up the graphics.
[QUOTE=Vinze;21563381]You need to work on your poetry, nobody likes the kind lacking rhyme unless it was written a few hundred years ago back when English was awesome. Also, might wanna turn up the graphics.[/QUOTE] It's not my poem, it's by Ruckert. And the graphics are up all the way, believe it or not. I turned AA up all the way also, but it didn't do much.
[QUOTE=SanderMan;21567980]It's not my poem, it's by Ruckert. And the graphics are up all the way, believe it or not. I turned AA up all the way also, but it didn't do much.[/QUOTE] Oh, my bad, either way, it was a good illustration had it not been for the somewhat weird posing.
[QUOTE=Vinze;21568114]Oh, my bad, either way, it was a good illustration had it not been for the somewhat weird posing.[/QUOTE] I'm going to try remaking it with a different model. The posing had to be compromised because the model is poorly rigged. I don't like his suit either.
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