Or, my prefered title, "I Have Become Lost to the World".
This is a picture I became inspired to make after hearing the song by Gustav Mahler, to the text of a poem by Friedrich Rückert. I don't think I did it much justice, however.....
[IMG]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/7872/iamlosttotheworld.jpg[/IMG]
Poem: I have become lost to the world,
With which I used to waste so much time;
It has heard nothing from me for so long,
That it may well believe that I have died!
I do not care at all,
If it considers me dead.
I also cannot contradict it,
For really I have died,
Died to the world.
I have died to the world's turmoil,
And I rest in a silent domain.
I live alone in my heaven,
In my love, in my song!
And song by Mahler: [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p8M6XLLDJW4[/url]
Not much more to say, I might try remaking it without it being so bland in the future.
The way his head is titled to the side looks quite odd and unnatural... like he has pulled a nerve or something.
The desaturated style is cool though.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;21522336]The way his head is titled to the side looks quite odd and unnatural... like he has pulled a nerve or something.
The desaturated style is cool though.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, I was trying to him look depressed but simply made him look like he was attacked by an animal in those woods.
First thing I noticed was the desperat need of AA.
[QUOTE=Tovleman;21538857]First thing I noticed was the desperat need of AA.[/QUOTE]
really well you must have some mighty fine corrective eye surgery done
first thing i noticed was crooked neck
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also, did you inflate his head just a bit?
I just spent about 5 minutes trying to find Slender Man in there.
[QUOTE=Reno360;21542707]I just spent about 5 minutes trying to find Slender Man in there.[/QUOTE]
Lol, nope, no SlenderMan.
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[QUOTE=bepassley;21538936]really well you must have some mighty fine corrective eye surgery done
first thing i noticed was crooked neck
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also, did you inflate his head just a bit?[/QUOTE]
No, his head is just a little big. I think the model is simply a reskin of Breen's body with a citizen head on it.
You need to work on your poetry, nobody likes the kind lacking rhyme unless it was written a few hundred years ago back when English was awesome.
Also, might wanna turn up the graphics.
[QUOTE=Vinze;21563381]You need to work on your poetry, nobody likes the kind lacking rhyme unless it was written a few hundred years ago back when English was awesome.
Also, might wanna turn up the graphics.[/QUOTE]
It's not my poem, it's by Ruckert. And the graphics are up all the way, believe it or not. I turned AA up all the way also, but it didn't do much.
[QUOTE=SanderMan;21567980]It's not my poem, it's by Ruckert. And the graphics are up all the way, believe it or not. I turned AA up all the way also, but it didn't do much.[/QUOTE]
Oh, my bad, either way, it was a good illustration had it not been for the somewhat weird posing.
[QUOTE=Vinze;21568114]Oh, my bad, either way, it was a good illustration had it not been for the somewhat weird posing.[/QUOTE]
I'm going to try remaking it with a different model. The posing had to be compromised because the model is poorly rigged. I don't like his suit either.
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