[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/wip22.jpg[/img]
1920x1080
[media]http://filesmelt.com/dl/bigger1.jpg[/media]
Any tips on what I can do to improve my editing or posing?
The hologram makes it very obvious that it's photoshoped. Try decreasing the transparency.
Other than that, it's perfect
[QUOTE=Skerion;29477016]The hologram makes it very obvious that it's photoshoped. Try decreasing the transparency.
Other than that, it's perfect[/QUOTE]
I think he just needs to add a little more detail to the hologram. The transparency doesnt look bad.
It's really cool, but I agree with the others, the hologram needs to be more transparent. Also, it would be good if it were actually giving off light.
Better or worse?
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/bigger2.jpg[/img]
Looks better.
Looks better, but you should decrease the opacity, it looks pretty fake.
Yes, it does make it look nicer, but as we said, make the hologram a little more see-through.
The border is the true problem.
And the fact she is indiscriminately firing her laser into the ground.
[editline]27th April 2011[/editline]
Oh wait, what? That is a laser sight?
Oh, my bad.
Funny, i just noticed the Laser sight.
That should be producing a glow.
I mean you should be able to see red light reflecting off of the character and environment, etc. Same thing with the hologram.
Sorry, you need to Log In to post a reply to this thread.
