[QUOTE=CrzyMLC;41161053]Read 'Of Combine and Men' again. I feel like we need some more HL2 based comedy comic now:
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/16363265/combinationcovermaybe.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/16363265/Combination/combine1.jpg[/img]
That posing is so subtle and so effective, it makes the comic for me. You did a really good job with the body language. Camera angles are great and the punchline is corny but really suits the dialogue build-up. It's short and sweet and something I could definitely see as a recurring series. This is a solid start to something [I]really[/I] great.
Civilians look kind of wooden in the second panel though. Is that intentional? Am I missing something there?
Everything that is standing are NPCs. I was honestly too lazy to pose bunch of background characters just for that scene. However, I know I could of done it better and took the time to pose characters in action rather than just standing.
[editline]24th June 2013[/editline]
Thanks for the comment though! [img]http://www.facepunch.com/fp/ratings/heart.png[/img]
why are their heads so lumpy
That was a very short, direct gag, but it was fun. Very sleek presentation too, which isn't something just anyone can do. Earned [url=http://metrocop.net/2013/06/25/combination-episode-1/]a blog post[/url] at Metrocop, which is really the only type of recommendation I can give nowadays.
Oh, and I'm not usually fond of absurd humor in comics, but if that other metrocop had pulled out sunglasses and put them on, I would've fallen to the floor laughing. Or as the kids say it, I'd ROFLMAO.
I was going to suggest putting on a second mask, instead of the sunglasses, but that definitely would have topped off the humor.
I feel like you haven't done anything in a while, Crzy... maybe I am just insane, but I'll be looking for your stuff; you're good content.
Heh, now you are my second favorite comic after LuaHelper. Nice work and it was funny too, keep it up.
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