This is my first time trying to pose and play around with some effects so go easy ok. Please post some feedback.
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The posing on soldiers is stiff, Citizen models blah, and Wouldn't they see his arm, and the gun, Either than that its good a pallet for first pose and effect
Dont use normal DoF mate, use Super DoF.
Also dont leave much wasted space, try to focus more on the citizen or the soldiers. (try not to show so many wall). Also its a little too bright for my taste, but thats just me :P
yeah i think i went a little overboard with the lights lol.
Haha, I remember doing so many poses similar to this. Like Santz said don't use normal DoF, it looks horrible. Remember to do finger posing, add some props to the scene like trash and crap.
Super DoF
Finger Pose
Edit picture with some shadows
Not so many lights
Work on posing
Keep picture at bigger res.
SFENWK.
Simple rules to live by.
^^^ As they say. You got the finger posing surprisingly well for your first try. Needs improvements, but it will come.
The main event as the title suggests "Citizen Execution" is almost hidden in the back of the pic. Focus on what the pic is about.
Citizen Execution was the best title i could come up with lol.
TRIGGER DISCIPLINE FUCK YEAR.
It's pretty decent.
Kinda average, nothing special, and nothing I can suggest that hasn't already been said. Try using an alternate map, though; I don't think the whole Daylight mod and rp_islands would make for good posing.
yeah i picked a bad map i would of picked a better one but i had to reinstall evrything on my new computer so i just picked a random map from the download page lol.
dem soldiers bout to get pwned
hell yeah :D
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