This is my first scenebuild, so any criticism and stuff like that is appreciated. Thanks!
[IMG]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/003/6/8/sunset_trek_by_benoski-d70n9xm.jpg[/IMG]
Map is gm_black, if anyone's curious!
[URL="http://benoski.deviantart.com/art/Sunset-Trek-424349194"]DeviantArt page [/URL]
[U][B]Here's a separate photo, showing the scenebuild:
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[IMG]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2014/003/2/3/scenebuild__final__by_benoski-d70nan0.jpg[/IMG]
For your first scenebuild it's very good, you have alot of potential.
I'm sure there's things that needs fixing but right now i don't see anything major.
[QUOTE=Viper123_SWE;43403488]For your first scenebuild it's very good, you have alot of potential.
I'm sure there's things that needs fixing but right now i don't see anything major.[/QUOTE]
I'm sure there is!
After I get the hang of things with the actual tools, I might try and start learing to use Photoshop.
i'm pretty sure the glow effect should be more orange-reddish
Hi
Honestly, I think the angle is bad. Should back up and zoom in more. The scenebuild is okay, but your eyes are drawn to the empty orange background, which I don't really understand why it's just a flat orange. Also, the lamp with the lensflare (if that's what it is) blocks out most of the vision from the build in the back, which ruins it.
[QUOTE=Trek;43404020]Hi[/QUOTE]
hi
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