Here is me trying out some editing or try to be better Tell me what you think and well enjoy
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The lighting on the soldier is kinda cool but I think the black bars are a bit unnecessary, maybe if they weren't so big.
-snip- is too late :saddowns:
The posing and the editing is good. You're certainly improving. Keep it up.
Well I hope That people still look at the thread even if the title is miss spelled If not I'm gonna be sad face
Not that bad
The high-res soldier model looks kinda superimposed on the background of the HL2 map (which looks saddeningly dated these days).
[QUOTE=The Combine;22378275]Not that bad[/QUOTE]
Thanks :D
Good editing. Muzzle flash should be more intense around the barrel mount. Blur is a wee bit strong and a you should have added a couple of more shells.
But this is nice. Have art.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;22378925]you should have added a couple of more shells.[/QUOTE]
Three shot burst
:downsgun::hf::fuckyou:
[QUOTE=CoolCorky;22378955]Three shot burst
:downsgun::hf::fuckyou:[/QUOTE]
Alright alright. My bad:madmax:
well it was more or less for pratice but thanks for the art
Nice job on the lighting and the muzzleflash. The shell farthest from the guy is blobbed or out of shape. Also, try not to use default flames.
Looks like he SOILdier his pants.
[QUOTE=ZombieWaffle;22383699]Looks like he SOILdier his pants.[/QUOTE]
Lol I knew someone was going to make fun of the title. thats still pretty funny tho
[QUOTE=CoolCorky;22378854]The high-res soldier model looks kinda superimposed on the background of the HL2 map (which looks saddeningly dated these days).[/QUOTE]
makes him look more detailed and appealing
Thats what I was going for
Wow, the lighting on his vest is amazing. The background needs some work though, theres just random fire, and no burn marks
Well This was mostly to pratice ragdoll posing and or lighting effects. The fire and background I just put there so It woundn't be so boring Maybe next time Ill make a better choices :D
The muzzleflash's color and the color of lighting on the soldier don't match.
Haters gonna hate
The lighting and angle are really good, albeit the muzzle flash is too bright and the lighting on the guy isn't consistent with it's colour. The posing; specifically around the legs, is really awkward. It should be facing more in the direction he's aiming. His head and neck should be moved down more toward his weapon, and his weapon should be less angled and raised toward his eyes more. The background is rather dull, empty, and some of those fire effects are floating. I do like the smoke, though.
Well since the soldier's supposed to be crossing the street while shooting, it'd be rather pointless to effectively aim down the sights.
[QUOTE=God's Pimp Hand;22395984]Well since the soldier's supposed to be crossing the street while shooting, it'd be rather pointless to effectively aim down the sights.[/QUOTE]
He's moving while crouching?
The lighting as Stanz said looks pretty good.
Next time Ill make a better one
[QUOTE=gtanoofa;22397039]I lke the mood, and is that c17_night ?[/QUOTE]
Thank you and no the city is not Night For Next picture I'm going to make it will be night
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