(Sorry about making this one short and confusing. I was having a hard time deciding what would happen to John after the shop incident. So I just settled with this basic idea. But I promise i'll make the next one worthwhile.)
In the middle of a small island, where the combine take their rule, enter John, a 28 year old bar owner who is
a hapless, and down-on-his-luck man who along with his friend Joe, begin a journey to retake their island and become kings.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/John_6.jpg[/IMG]
He looks very shocked to find himself in a prision.
[editline]02:08AM[/editline]
Whoops spelt prison wrong.
The characters in this series could use a bit of development and more personality, but I like the story and where it's going.
[QUOTE=MADmarine;18585907]The characters in this series could use a bit of development and more personality, but I like the story and where it's going.[/QUOTE]
Oh trust me they are going to develop, it's just that I have yet to introduce them all.
Sorry, you need to Log In to post a reply to this thread.
