• Leaked Jupiter IV MESA Report, Comm. Miles Kilby, 19/6/97
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[QUOTE][B]++TRANSMISSION ESTABLISHED++ [DATA CORRUPTED] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...][/B] [I]easearch into the [URL="http://i.cubeupload.com/nHIKnJ.png"]totem[/URL] we discovered near Valhalla C1 has given no clear indication of its origins or the constituent parts of its construction. Everyone's been on edge since we brought the samples in - half the science team is seeing Dr Finch daily, and I'm not sure I like the look in some of their eyes. Took a rover back out to the C1 dig site with Jack just to get outside and away from everyone. Took some more samples from the pillar and started running them through the attached lab cabin. Compositional tests are currently inconclusive, but ongoing. We decided to return to the lab 0300 hours into the expeditio[/I][B][DATA CORRUPTED][/B] [B][ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [DATA CORRUPTED][/B] [I]Thought I saw movement along the rim of the crater and decided to look around on my own. In light of our recent findings, we couldn't afford to let these things go uninvestigated. Jack wanted to stay with the rover to continue processing the samples in the rover's attached cabin. No problem with me - he seemed distracted when I left, kept staring up at Jupiter as we were driving along, initially thought some time alone would do us both good. Didn't see anything around and felt like I was being watched, so at this point I headed back. [/I] [B][ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...][/B] [I]just not clear how Jack could have survived the vacuum long enough to brain himself, or more importantly why. Just kept looking up at Jupiter. He detached his camera and positioned it to film himself. Was smiling as he did it. [URL="http://i.cubeupload.com/9J2Oss.png"]I'm including the footage in this report.[/URL] I should have been able to tell he was going to do something like this. I should have known. There's blood on my suit. I should have known.[/I] [B][DATA CORRUPTED] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...][/B] [I]finch came out of a session with a black eye and a tooth missing today. whole science team is nervous since fischer and roe went missing, but didn't think it was getting that bad. haven't been paying proper attention to the mission since jack died. found fischer's suit hidden in the western airlock compartment, no air in the tanks. must have left without it and kept walking. seeing movement outside like i did around the crater. maybe its fischer.[/I] [B] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [/B] [I]SOS 130° 22° 85° SOS SOS SOS SO[/I] [B] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...] [ATTEMPTING TO PARSE...][/B] [I]thereis something on jupiter_[/I][/QUOTE]
yeah im out of here you made it too creepy.
2spooky4me
It reminds me of Dead Space and I love Dead Space! The short story was very nice, the images helped to get into the right mood. They made everything more creepy. You should probably try your hand at comics? Very nice, 10/10, please keep doing more!
Really impressive, I'm enjoying each and every one of these that you post!
[QUOTE=The Combine;43980717]It reminds me of Dead Space and I love Dead Space! The short story was very nice, the images helped to get into the right mood. They made everything more creepy. You should probably try your hand at comics? Very nice, 10/10, please keep doing more![/QUOTE] i am actually planning on doing a shortish comic related to this, but i know how easily those kinds of projects slip away and never get done. so this is basically just insurance that i will have actually produced something even if the full comic never gets made.
[QUOTE=Cone;43980807]i am actually planning on doing a shortish comic related to this, but i know how easily those kinds of projects slip away and never get done. so this is basically just insurance that i will have actually produced something even if the full comic never gets made.[/QUOTE] I know what you are talking about. Personally I always end up rushing my pictures, so they get done but are half-assed, shallow and content is missing which really is a shame. You should just make like, a panel a day or something even if it's just minor progress but it will get done. Or work on 2 things at once, I haven't tried that yet but maybe it helps not to get bored. It also helps if you are kind of stuck with 1 picture, not knowing what to add and the like. Currently I am working on a picture and thinking up a concept for a comic. When I don't know what to do with the picture I draw scribbles of the comic, a short story board, stuff like that! Kind of what you did here, a mini story that maybe leads up to something bigger. Looking forward to the comic, if it gets made!
gave me the willies please make more, this is awesome
That was a great read Cone, can't wait to see more!
There must be more!
I like it, but in the first picture the two space guys look duped, at least, just too similar in pose, but that's probably just from the suit itself. Good job though!
6spooky8me
all these worlds are yours except europa europa fhtagn
MOOOOAAAAAR!
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