Hello FP!
Currently im working with my 2 friends Shellman and Miku on a movie im recently make in my server.
Story:
The story is about a combine soldiers who´s name is rookie, is requested in a raid with a few other combines, he shoots down a civic, just like any other soldier he returns to base but he does not have a good feeling about this whole rebel shoot thingy, the camp leader detects a faulty hardware failure in the memory of Rookie which make him forgot that he MUST work for the combine, so he is transported to the nearest city to repair the armor and memory, but he gets attacked by the rebels and taken over to there camp..
Shows a preview of some footage.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AWFF9LyLShg[/media]
Pics of the scenes
[img]http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/2010/06/09/1276079439-760.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/2010/06/09/1276079492-110.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/2010/06/09/1276079553-690.jpg[/img]
[img]http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/2010/06/09/1276079649-420.jpg[/img]
Please do note that we are making changes in the script all the time and that the trailer was a demo.
meh, looks okay.
The trailer was bad, your camera angles were just the camera swep, which I'd suggest to heavily move away from. Instead, use Catmull-Rom cameras.
Needs more DoF
Could use a bit more DoF.
Just a little then
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