Rebel Escaped from City 17: Ethen continues to white forrest

[raptorfromswede]

Diary side 1 [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=902633[/url]

Diary side 2 [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=902870[/url]

Diary side 3 [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=908522[/url]

and now...
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The time is 16:34.

I Have Gone The whole damn day.
finally I find a farm.
in the yard I see a house. and a barn.
shit what a big hole in the ceiling. must be inspected.

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in the barn finds i a man who bleeds.
He says he is a Rebel so I can be calm
Ethen: what has happened?

Man: They attacked us ..

Ethen: Tell me more.

Man: do not really know what to say ...

Ethen: come on, I can help you.

Man: no. no one can help me.

The man closes his eyes and stop breathing.

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So I went to White Forest, now I'm so close.

to be continued....

[Vinze]

General stiff posing, pretentious, unoriginal story...

Great to read before going to sleep, though.

[headshotter]

I don't see where this is pretentious. Posing is really good. The story kinda suck ass tho.

[raptorfromswede]

I've come up with the story itself so no it is not unorginal.

[Joazzz]

Run, forrest, run!

[Vinze]

[QUOTE=headshotter;22616509]I don't see where this is pretentious. Posing is really good. The story kinda suck ass tho.[/QUOTE]

It's all the excessive drama, not to mention three freakin' pages for the purpouse of a few measly screenshots. Stories and drama are always pretentious and rediculous in general.