Part 1: [URL]http://www.facepunch.com/threads/716497-Zero-Hour-Part-1[/URL](thread has links to other parts)
[IMG]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/105644753/gmod/ZH2.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/105644753/gmod/ZH2-2_2.jpg[/IMG]
Feedback is always appreciated. :D
I like it mainly because how natural the people feel in it.
That was awesome. Could you link me to the first part please?
Dude, I have been waiting for part 2 for months, and this is all you did? Don't get me wrong, it's good...but waaaaaay to short for how long it took you. Come on bro man.
[QUOTE=Geos88;17922455]Dude, I have been waiting for part 2 for months, and this is all you did? Don't get me wrong, it's good...but waaaaaay to short for how long it took you. Come on bro man.[/QUOTE]
Yeah college does that, also some parts of the story need to be worked out...but now that most of the story is set in stone, development [b]should[/b] go smoothly now.
It's still good for what it is. I really enjoyed it so keep up the hard work, CPSharp!
[quote=fort83;17923385]by the way cpsharp where did you get the walky talkys?[/quote]
l4d :p
Not as good as the first one but great anyway.
i like the part where the marines are yelling at each other
Nice work as always.
I like the random situations you've thrown in, i.e. with the iphone. Most of them break up the action sequences nicely. A couple of them seemed to clash with what was going on, but overall the comic's been spectacular (as I'm sure you realize). Looking forward to the next one.
It was ok, but not as good as the first.
I didn't really understand what was going on in this one.
First part of this was awesome.
This is awesome
[QUOTE=Drainwater;17955513]A couple of them seemed to clash with what was going on[/QUOTE]
Can you specify which ones so I can avoid such clashment in the future? Also thanks for CC everyone :]
[QUOTE=CPShArp;17995311]Can you specify which ones so I can avoid such clashment in the future? Also thanks for CC everyone :][/QUOTE]
Well for me that scene with the commander asking the soldier where Gibs was seemed a little forced. But the rest of it was excellent imo.
This is so fucking amazing :O I cant wait for the other parts!
Hmmm
links broken, then fixed, then broken again and now magically fixed again....WOOT FILESMELT! :D
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