First Shot Edit

[Beepin]

Feedback would be appreciated on what I did wrong, and what I could do to improve :>
the map is hydro in-case you couldn't tell

[B][U]RAW (used filters in-game):[/U][/B]
[url]http://i55.tinypic.com/35l93q9.png[/url]
[url]http://i56.tinypic.com/ieh1ed.png[/url]

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EDITED:[/U][/B]
[img]http://i51.tinypic.com/ngay5s.png[/img]
[img]http://i54.tinypic.com/vmvjar.png[/img]

[Minilandstan]

I like the original blue version.