U.S. Army Base Infection

[stevo8825]

[IMG]http://i48.tinypic.com/2d6m7fs.jpg[/IMG]
One Special Forces soldier is all that remained...

Posed by me, my first attempt at editing.
Constructive criticism please.

[Daddy-of-war]

Good idea, but the posing needs lots of work, and so does the editing

[LewyJudge12]

Blood needs alot of work, but for a first attempt it's okay. Try to add entry and exit points, where the blood is going one direction if you get me.

[kevinseven]

Here is my criticism...That blood looks like it should be on a wall maybe...Not from some one getting shot. Now the posing needs work we all can say that.... but try and work on your posing every day for a week or so then maybe if you think its post worthy then edit up some good blood or what ever. Keep it up and you can get better.

EDIT: darn ninjas...

[Zeraxify]

Looks like the army invented some kind of sideways shooting gun of some kind.

[editline]01:14AM[/editline]

Of a kind

[TheCastro]

pew pew, as promised :buddy:
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/cs_compound00007edit.jpg[/img]

[The Combine]

[QUOTE=The Castro;18736427]pew pew, as promised :buddy:
[img]Shitty shit[/QUOTE]

Why wasting time by editing shitty screenshots?
Seriously the posing in the picture sux and the edit is strange.

[stevo8825]

[QUOTE=Zeraxify;18736315]Looks like the army invented some kind of sideways shooting gun of some kind.

[editline]01:14AM[/editline]

Of a kind[/QUOTE]

Yeah bro i tried to fix that but i just couldn't get it right! Thanks for the tips though. =D

[TheCastro]

[editline]06:27PM[/editline]

[QUOTE=The Combine;18736478]Why wasting time by editing shitty screenshots?
Seriously the posing in the picture sux and the edit is strange.[/QUOTE]

it was a favor

[The Combine]

[QUOTE=The Castro;18736543][editline]06:27PM[/editline]

it was a favor[/QUOTE]

Okay

[Dr. Jim Dean]

[QUOTE=The Combine;18736610]Okay[/QUOTE]

You are dumb.

[editline]12:34AM[/editline]

Okay

[TheCastro]

[QUOTE=Dr. Jim Dean;18736661]You are dumb.

[editline]12:34AM[/editline]

Okay[/QUOTE]

The random troll has struck! beware!
:psyberger:

[The Combine]

[QUOTE=Dr. Jim Dean;18736661]You are dumb.

[editline]12:34AM[/editline]

Okay[/QUOTE]

Says the guy with 51 posts :geno:

[Dr. Jim Dean]

[QUOTE=The Combine;18736713]Says the guy with 51 posts :geno:[/QUOTE]

Judging a person on post count shows your ignorance.

[UltaPonch]

Low res m240 posed poorly. Even if a gun is on a bipod, you still have to hold it correctly. A hip fired m240 on a bipod is gonna fire just as bad as any other hip fired gun.

[The_J_Hat]

Yeah, plus the muzzle flash is coming out of the side on the barrel.

[1nfiniteseed]

The camo patterns the soldier and the infected are wearing seem to contradict each other.

[UltaPonch]

[QUOTE=1nfiniteseed;18740194]The camo patterns the soldier and the infected are wearing seem to contradict each other.[/QUOTE]

Everyone knows that Army is for newbs who easily gets infected. All the pros go marines.

[stevo8825]

Bottom line: It sucks.

[UberGamer]

The muzzle flash doesn't fit the angle that the gun is at.

And the blood needs to be much darker, also work on posing.
Oh, and with muzzle flashes, I find it looks better if you make an orange/yellow light bulb where the muzzle flash will be put, looks more realistic.

[stevo8825]

[QUOTE=UberGamer;18747671]The muzzle flash doesn't fit the angle that the gun is at.

And the blood needs to be much darker, also work on posing.
Oh, and with muzzle flashes, I find it looks better if you make an orange/yellow light bulb where the muzzle flash will be put, looks more realistic.[/QUOTE]

Thanks for the tips bro, but I think I'm just gonna quit posing and start doing some contraptions, for the sake of the forums lol.