This is my first comic so don't go so hard on me.
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/panel1fix.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/panel2y.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/panel31.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/panel4fix.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/panel5o.jpg[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/panel6.jpg[/img]
Credits:
Imanoob - Creating the poses and scene build in Gmod
Sweetleaf - Editing the images
Please give a fair criticism and tell me if anything is wrong,i'll try to improve.
Don't use that font for the location text/time frame. It's hard to read when it's all droppy. Seems good for a first, I'd like to see more.
Thanks for the comment,sorry for the mistake
[QUOTE=No Intentions;23073688]Don't use that font for the location text/time frame. It's hard to read when it's all droppy. Seems good for a first, I'd like to see more.[/QUOTE]
I donno man that fonts pretty easy to read
[QUOTE=No Intentions;23073688]Don't use that font for the location text/time frame. It's hard to read when it's all droppy. Seems good for a first, I'd like to see more.[/QUOTE]
We have selected a clearer font. Thanks for the advice!
[QUOTE=MetabolicHigh;23074542]We have selected a clearer font. Thanks for the advice![/QUOTE]
Just to let everyone know,MetabolicHigh is my partner in making this series,he is the one who edits the pics
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