[QUOTE]“[I]You're reaching out
And no one hears you cry
You're freaking out again
'Cause all your fears
Remind you another dream has come undone
You feel so small and lost like you're the only one
You wanna scream 'cause you're
Desperate
You want somebody, just anybody
To lay their hands on your soul tonight
You want a reason to keep believin'
That someday you're gonna see the light
You're in the dark
There's no one left to call
And sleep's your only friend
Well even sleep
Can't hide you from all those tears
And all the pain and all the days
You wasted pushin' them away
It's your life, it's time you face it[/I]”
- [I][B]David Archuleta[/B][/I][/QUOTE]
[video=youtube;W3qkiHuslDQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3qkiHuslDQ[/video]
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That blood seems out of place
Not sure if the hand holding the stag up looks right.
Snow edit could use more depth imo, but overall, not bad.
I think you need to improve on the blood effect, but the rest looks great.
Music adds a lot to it, too.
Well done!
It looks like his hand is clipping a bit, and he must be pretty strong to lift up it's head that high with only one hand. Blood could be better. Sad song is sad though.
Blood could change a bit, it looks more like red spray than... Blood... Anyways, looks pretty good man.
I can't edit the thread anymore so here's another version.
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i feel like the faceposing might be a little strong/unnatural, and it's sorta unclear what's happening in the picture
other than that it looks pretty good
[QUOTE=RoblixWW2;45922530]I can't edit the thread anymore so here's another version.[/QUOTE]
It's the brightness of the blood which is why it stands out.
Since the stags face is darker and stong light isn't being cast on it,
you should try edit the blood a bit darker to match the current lighting.
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