[QUOTE]2017. The population of Earth suddenly starts dropping like a rock. Screams and gunshots are heard across the globe, but the cause is unknown. Fear and paranoia reach unprecedented levels as people try to find out why their own neighbors are vanishing and turning up dead.
The first contact; a machine-like being with a chainsaw mounted cybernetically onto it's right arm, ripping an innocent bystander to bloody shreds in an alleyway. They're not some cliche aliens taking our technology - they [i]are[/i] our technology. As if knowing that they've been compromised, armies of various humanoid machines appear over the world in a matter of days, destroying cities and nations in a pure genocide of the human race.
2024, New York City. The 'headquarters' of survivors across the globe. A single unit of these machine armies has been reprogrammed - a female infiltration unit designed for sniping and assassination. But the enemy gets closer every day. Is this one unit capable of being able to save the remnants of humanity? She's about to find out - one bullet at a time.[/QUOTE]
"We'd just gotten the female unit online after a week's worth of trying to reprogram her. Kyle, Jack, Amy, and some teen survivor named Jammie were all that was left to escort the machine back to HQ. Then, one of their goddamn infiltration units showed up, probably one of the same units ours was.. Jack was shot in the back of the head, while Kyle was shot in the gut and then thrown almost off the street into a highway below. Amy- goddamn these machines, the fucker filled her with lead as she fell against the fence.
Jammie just got shot in the gut, the stupid brat.. I'm low on ammo, and I think I see a damn Judge off in the rooftops... Seems the reprogrammed unit's picked up a Tachi handgun, though; I just hope it's enough.." ~ Harold Steinbar
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[b]Original:[/b]
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[b]Bonus:[/b]
The Combat Unit, Sera '361' - a front view
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Close-Up of Harold
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Opposing Infiltration Unit
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[b]Notes:[/b]
- First released poses. Very stiff, the hands aren't directly on the guns nor are the fingers appropriately on the grips/triggers, and the effects are minimal/poor. I simply was just posing for the hell of it, and decided to make a backstory to go along with it. If I knew how to make comics, I might just expand upon this if I wasn't lazy.
- Fun fact: the weapons are world models of the Neotokyo weapons.
- I think Sera's model is from the TnB megapack/donator models, but not entirely sure. Not my favorite model, but with a lack of female models that aren't nudes, i'm sure someone will understand.
- Yes, that is an RE4 Ashley model, who's meant to be 'Jammie'. I tried to keep her out of the shots due to the model itself lacking face/finger posing.
- 'Judge' on the left rooftop.
The camera angle looks a little boring, there's nothing to really focus on, try zooming in more and you also pretty much gave yourself the rest of the constructive criticism in your notes.
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Also use [img]*link*[/img] for your screenshots
[QUOTE]you also pretty much gave yourself the rest of the constructive criticism in your notes.[/QUOTE]
What can I say, I like being honest.
But yeah, I should've figured that the camera angle was abit too open.. Seems I screwed up in the balance between face-to-face and a sniper standoff..
Also, if anyone could tell me the [] command for having to open those spoiler things or whatever to see the other pictures, i'd appreciate it.
The picture is mediocre, but the back story was actually quite interesting O_o
camera angle is quite boring.
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