[img]http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7113/barpic.jpg[/img]
[B]Map Used:[/B]
gm_flatgrass
[B]Time Taken:[/B]
[I]Scene [/I] - 60 minutes
[I]Posing [/I] - 20 minutes
[I]Editing [/I] - 5 minutes
[B]In-Game Effects:[/B]
[I]Bloom[/I] - I only used a tiny amount of bloom. It was set to the starter setting 'cold' with the brightness halved.
[I]Colour Mod[/I] - I used colour mod to add a tiny hint of orange and red to the edges of the props/ragdolls.
[B]Photoshop Effects:[/B]
[I]Hue/Saturation Overlay[/I] - The hue/saturation overlay I added wasn't very noticeable, as it was just a bright, opaque red with a hint of yellow. :L
[I]Brushes[/I] - No explanation needed, since its rather obvious.
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My 4th scene and my 2nd pose. :L
[URL="http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=970497"]My first pose was a simple sniper one.[/URL]
It might be a bit hard to see, but the guy is holding the end of a broken beer bottle in his left hand. He killed the bartender (the dead guy on the wall.)
:siren: C&C? :siren:
I don't think it's bad, but the bar is pretty weird though. Good work, giving an artistic.
[QUOTE=Butthurter;23402671]The way the wooden walls of your scenebuild tiles is really unfitting.[/QUOTE]
I don't know how to fix that. D:
[QUOTE=Butthurter;23402886]You could try using an EP2 wall texture for that?[/QUOTE]
Actually I could'[I]ve[/I]. :p
Once I take the pictures I just delete the scene, since I make them all on public multiplayer servers (hence no custom skins either.) :L
Are the EP2 materials listed in the material tool's selection thingo? If they are I'll keep that in mind for my next scene.
[QUOTE=Angush;23403022]Actually I could'[I]ve[/I]. :p
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:toughguy: Smart move, picking on the critics...
A few pointers:
The color is way too amplified outside the window, the gnome's hat is too intense.
The lightning on the stunstick is terrible.
The metrocop looks stupid, he gets a report about a homocide, and yet he's just staring into his stunstick distractedly while the killer is right infront of him. What? Did they send in the special kid or something?
I know this is knit-picking, but so is "could'[I]ve[/I]".
I do not like the over-saturation of the colors, and it appears you don't know what you want to focus on. It's like looking through a security camera in the corner of the room that just swivels back and forth.
[quote]The color is way too amplified outside the window, the gnome's hat is too intense. [/quote]
Holy shit it is. :L
[quote]It's like looking through a security camera in the corner of the room that just swivels back and forth. [/quote]
That was actually my intention. I didn't add camera effects because the ones I edited in were shit.
(Simon Pegg ftw?)
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