The posing on Paul's legs are a little off, his right leg looks broken.
And in the 6th picture, the briefcase is just kinda flopping around, and his hand isn't holding it.
[editline]01:57PM[/editline]
Why are they in an office anyway?
[QUOTE=Moonsorrow;19237323]Looks unfinished to me.[/QUOTE]
Hah, I was thinking of making more, but I got lazy.
[editline]09:59PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=SplinterSim4;19237382]The posing on Paul's legs are a little off, his right leg looks broken.
And in the 6th picture, the briefcase is just kinda flopping around, and his hand isn't holding it.
[editline]01:57PM[/editline]
Why are they in an office anyway?[/QUOTE]
Yeah I know, a friend pointed that out to me before I posted it, but I didn't want to fix it :(.
Eh, I don't know. I was just messing around on office and got the idea to make a comic.
[editline]10:00PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=Moonsorrow;19237323]Looks unfinished to me.[/QUOTE]
Don't rate him disagree, he's correct actually.
I don't get it but yea cool comic
Great comic. Add me on STEAM Sometime Slbobo.
Well, who says you have to lie to americans, lie to every person you meet about anything and everything.
Also, decent comic.
[QUOTE=R3mix;19247611]Great comic. Add me on STEAM Sometime Slbobo.[/QUOTE]
alrighty well my steam name is slbobo lol
Lols.
Pretty cool.
Mostly, this is well done. The layout's excellent, posing and face posing is good (apart from that one panel), good font, and well laid out speech bubbles. It makes a big difference when they're in proper order.
However, in some panels the screenshots looked very aliased. If you haven't already, bump up the settings, or, if you've already done that, try some editing techniques to smooth them out (can't recommend any, unfortunately).
Last point; I'm being a bit hypocritical here, but I didn't find the joke particularly funny. It's been done before, and it wasn't especially pertinent.
Overall, I'd rate you artistic if I could.
[QUOTE=QwertySecond;19258840]Mostly, this is well done. The layout's excellent, posing and face posing is good (apart from that one panel), good font, and well laid out speech bubbles. It makes a big difference when they're in proper order.
However, in some panels the screenshots looked very aliased. If you haven't already, bump up the settings, or, if you've already done that, try some editing techniques to smooth them out (can't recommend any, unfortunately).
Last point; I'm being a bit hypocritical here, but I didn't find the joke particularly funny. It's been done before, and it wasn't especially pertinent.
Overall, I'd rate you artistic if I could.[/QUOTE]
Thank you, very well constructed comment. Yeah the aliasing is apparent in some of the frames =/
Paul's leg looks painful.
Hah, it is.
Slbobo!? Wow man...I remember you from back when [i]I was starting out.[/i]
How ya been? Nice to see you've returned.
[QUOTE=Striker89;19300908]Slbobo!? Wow man...I remember you from back when [i]I was starting out.[/i]
How ya been? Nice to see you've returned.[/QUOTE]
Hah I've been good man, just getting back up on that ball again :P What about yourself?
[QUOTE=slbobo;19311218]Hah I've been good man, just getting back up on that ball again :P What about yourself?[/QUOTE]
Not too bad. Keepin tabs on all the kids ya know...
Yeah haha, you should add me onto steam, slbobo is the username :)
Sorry, you need to Log In to post a reply to this thread.
