• John #8
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(Sorry if this took long too come out and that it's WAY too short. My comp suffered a BSoD when installing Windows 7 on it and all lost all my data. So it could be roughly a month to get situated. So this is just a tiny comic to at least progress the series a little) In the middle of a small island, where the combine take their rule, enter John, a 28 year old bar owner who is a hapless, and down-on-his-luck man who along with his friend Joe, begin a journey to retake their island and become kings. [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/John8.jpg[/IMG]
Eeeh... While you did make an effort with the speechbubbles, I can't say very much about this comic, mostly because pretty much nothing happens in it. Try and add more of the story next time - the best novels, sitcoms and comics end a chapter or episode at a very suspenseful moment.
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