So here's the version with the snow effect (It's seamless as long as you don't stare for too long.)
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/XaqB5Wy.jpg[/IMG]
And the version without it. (no modification)
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/OIR4rUv.jpg[/IMG]
I tried to do a fire effect but it looked like absolute shit
Surprisingly not a lot of JPEG artifacts here.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/rzSNPLT.jpg[/IMG].
And now for these guys who're being haunted by JPEG artifacts.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/bwhmspb.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/RSI0JhK.jpg[/IMG]
I think my everything skills needs work.
The snow effect is bad, it blocks the view for rest of the pic.
The camera angles are okay but a lot of wasted space. Work more on your posing, at the moment it's kinda stiff and lifeless(?).
And what is going on with the colours? Red and blue doesn't make everything look good.
Your Artorias scenes are too dark and contrasty / sharp. That bloom also needs to be less intense.
The snow looks more like Pollocked(spelling?) paint splatters on a wall with the opacity turned down. Just circle splatters. Turn down the contrast and turn down the saturation
The snow needs some work
a) it looks like a uniform layer in front of the picture as opposed to being inside of it.
b) it obstructs far too much.
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