Tracers suck sorry.
Muzzleflash sucks.
Posing is good though.
You really should improve your effects, and the 'are' in the title is unnecessary.
The grunts on the wall could use some shadow. Other than that I agree with FrEeKy ThInG.
[QUOTE=FrEeKy ThInG;24386052]Tracers suck sorry.
Muzzleflash sucks.
Posing is good though.[/QUOTE]
yeah I am not so good at making effect :(
do you have link to the tut?
The effects look like flashlights, but the posing was great.
BROWN EWW, GTFO. loljk, it isn't that bad. The effects are pretty bad but the posing is pretty great.
Jesus fucking christ this picture pisses me off.
That tracer looks more like a giant cumshot, and those muzzle flashes look like fuzzy transluscent blobs.
The situation is basically your standard MW2 "lets run out in the open and unload at eachother until either one of us dies first!" crap that has no suspense, tension, or any sort of depth or emotion to their action such as desperation, agression, fear, or tactic and strategy whatsoever.
Why is it such a recurring thing for your poses to have tracers flying midair, anyway? Bullets kinda are moving [i]really fucking fast.[/i] It would be fine to have some random tracer zipping off far from someone or for it to just be in one or two pics, but when it's going dead on toward someone it just looks stupid to see it as such a recurring theme..
The posing isn't that impressive. The HECU looking guy to the farthest right especially so. His right leg doesn't even really look like it's touching the ground, and his left is much too damn bent, and wouldn't support the forward leaning of his torso. The man next him's right leg is tucked in toward his left leg far too much, and even the weight of his leaning back rear end and lower torso wouldn't support him from falling forward. His upper torso posing is okay I guess, but why is he holding his weapon off to the side? It looks weird as hell, and it doesn't even look like his head or eyes are looking in the same direction he's firing. The guy far off to the left I can't really say much about since most of his body isn't even in frame. What I can say though is he shows just how bad the angle is. I can't even tell where he's shooting. You might as well show him shooting Mr. Offscreen. The guys rappelling down I guess look fine. They don't really look like their bodies are fighting against gravity too much, though.
[QUOTE=FrEeKy ThInG;24386052]Tracers suck sorry.
Muzzleflash sucks.
Posing is good though.[/QUOTE]
Instead of going:
"BLAH SUCKS
SHIT SUCKS
FUCKING THIS SUCK"
Why don't you actually TELL US what's so bad about it?
[QUOTE=Loen;24403459]Jesus fucking christ this picture pisses me off.
That tracer looks more like a giant cumshot, and those muzzle flashes look like fuzzy transluscent blobs.
The situation is basically your standard MW2 "lets run out in the open and unload at eachother until either one of us dies first!" crap that has no suspense, tension, or any sort of depth or emotion to their action such as desperation, agression, fear, or tactic and strategy whatsoever.
Why is it such a recurring thing for your poses to have tracers flying midair, anyway? Bullets kinda are moving [i]really fucking fast.[/i] It would be fine to have some random tracer zipping off far from someone or for it to just be in one or two pics, but when it's going dead on toward someone it just looks stupid to see it as such a recurring theme..
The posing isn't that impressive. The HECU looking guy to the farthest right especially so. His right leg doesn't even really look like it's touching the ground, and his left is much too damn bent, and wouldn't support the forward leaning of his torso. The man next him's right leg is tucked in toward his left leg far too much, and even the weight of his leaning back rear end and lower torso wouldn't support him from falling forward. His upper torso posing is okay I guess, but why is he holding his weapon off to the side? It looks weird as hell, and it doesn't even look like his head or eyes are looking in the same direction he's firing. The guy far off to the left I can't really say much about since most of his body isn't even in frame. What I can say though is he shows just how bad the angle is. I can't even tell where he's shooting. You might as well show him shooting Mr. Offscreen. The guys rappelling down I guess look fine. They don't really look like their bodies are fighting against gravity too much, though.[/QUOTE]
thanks, I've got your ideas
[QUOTE=JDER14;24408097]Instead of going:
"BLAH SUCKS
SHIT SUCKS
FUCKING THIS SUCK"
Why don't you actually TELL US what's so bad about it?[/QUOTE]
I AM informing him of the bad points. Don't be a fucking Kurit.
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