And BATMAN Said no... **** YOU! - Garry's Mod

In honour of gigaz3r0's (name of his youtube channel) original "BATMAN BEGINS" Audio story. My first video for the STEAM group "The Extraordinary League of Mentlegens". A video of me and Morgan Freeman (which is gigaz3r0) tells a story on how Batman began. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u_aVq2Y60jg[/media] Remember to leave a comment here or in youtube's comment for your constructive criticism. And if you like it, SUBSCRIBE... OR BATMAN WILL HUNT YOU DOWN.

I barely got 2 minutes in and I saw 80% of all bad GMod movie stereotypes (thruster arms, scenes of character playing on computer, tourettes guy, etc.). Point? Be more original.

[QUOTE=Slithersoul;24213597]I barely got 2 minutes in and I saw 80% of all bad GMod movie stereotypes (thruster arms, scenes of character playing on computer, tourettes guy, etc.). Point? Be more original.[/QUOTE] I thought it could use some "memes" and I know it might not even be that decent(I agree also) but remember this is my very first video. I'll be sure my next video will be more original, thanks for the advice :D

You should use catmull-cameras instead of walking about with your camera tool out. Also ren and stimpy soundtrack is a bit cliche.

Going to write as I watch. Ren and Stimpy soundtrack is overused, lag isn't funny, use Source Recorder to get rid of lag, be original (e.g. little/no memes), horrible pacing, the computer destruction by flailing arms is used in every "randum" video, can't understand old dude half the time, stupid racism, more flailing/random explosions, kill notices showing, fullbright gm_construct, lame ending. But hey, it's your first video, and you're accepting criticism, which is always preferable to "NO MY VIDEO IS GREAT YOU'RE DUMB!" Just learn from your mistakes and try again.

[QUOTE=G71tc4;24222758]Going to write as I watch. Ren and Stimpy soundtrack is overused, lag isn't funny, use Source Recorder to get rid of lag, be original (e.g. little/no memes), horrible pacing, the computer destruction by flailing arms is used in every "randum" video, can't understand old dude half the time, stupid racism, more flailing/random explosions, kill notices showing, fullbright gm_construct, lame ending. But hey, it's your first video, and you're accepting criticism, which is always preferable to "NO MY VIDEO IS GREAT YOU'RE DUMB!" Just learn from your mistakes and try again.[/QUOTE] Why thank you my good man for your honest opinions, thanks to you I can create and film much more better Gmod 10 Machinimas next time :D. I have a question though if you have the time to answere this, is "Source Recorder" have as-good/better FPS and film quality like the Full version of "FRAPS"?

[QUOTE=OldManCrocets;24227847]Why thank you my good man for your honest opinions, thanks to you I can create and film much more better Gmod 10 Machinimas next time :D. I have a question though if you have the time to answere this, is "Source Recorder" have as-good/better FPS and film quality like the Full version of "FRAPS"?[/QUOTE] Source Recorder is not actually a recorder, it renders your scene frame by frame and puts it together at a desired framerate, (usually 24 or 30 fps.) So it will never lag no matter what. And you don't buy or download it, its part of the game. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LST_VkTlKiE[/media]

[QUOTE=Captain Om Nom;24235865]Source Recorder is not actually a recorder, it renders your scene frame by frame and puts it together at a desired framerate, (usually 24 or 30 fps.) So it will never lag no matter what. And you don't buy or download it, its part of the game. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LST_VkTlKiE[/media][/QUOTE] This video should get you going. Just come back if any help is needed.

The only part I enjoyed was the "Story" but only because it was one of those "So bad, it's good" cases, that was intentional right? Because if so it did make me laugh. Might I suggest speeding things up the intro segment? Like the dicking around with all those doors wasn't too terribly needed. Also I've got to say you're taking all of this criticism well.

[QUOTE=Captain Om Nom;24216066]You should use catmull-cameras instead of walking about with your camera tool out. Also ren and stimpy soundtrack is a bit cliche.[/QUOTE] Catmull is broken now.